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for Conditional

by Inuzuka

person kaesaku
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wah~!
don't delete it!
please, please continue!
con..ti..nue..~
^^
person fujinakaheero
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I definately like the progress of this story so far. It's good and I'm enjoying the good read. I just wanted you to know you have another fan who's trying to keep up with this story and really likes this story.
So until next time,
ja ne!
Fujinakaheero
person syrrah
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
gosh, this is awesome. aww don't stop. i think it's really good
person Stagoya
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really, really love this story so far, I really hope you don't delete it.
person Luthien Wildglen
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am very impressed by your fic. I complement you on your portrayal of the characters. The sides of both Sasuke and Naruto that you are showing are not easy to write about. I commend you for an excellent fic. The only problem I have with the story so far is that it is not finished. In order to remedy this problem I would hope that you would update soon.
person ZeldaFitz
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've really enjoyed this fic and would like for you to continue. I think you're off to a good start.
person Rasengan22
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yack, my computer shut down as I was writing about how much I'd kick your butt (not threatening, joking... or am I?) if you deleted this fic. I think I just went on and on about how freaking disappointing it would be to lose such an awesome piece of fiction, it's seriously one of my top 4 of all time, and it's not even complete! And I was just thinking about e-mailing you (actually haven't checked to see if you have an email because the note freaked me out). For more specific details about what I love, see first insanely long review under kyuubigirl. This story has mucho potential, and I'd hate for it to go away, but ultimately the decision is yours. I'd suggest taking a few days to get back into the swing of the story and see if you want to nix it. I've personally been waiting for you to update, so that sucked it wasn't for a new chapter! Anyway, and if it'll help, I'll come up with like a damn 2 page list of possible next chapter names if I have to, so you'll at least squeeze out one more. The relationship you have going is far different than any of the stories for your own reasons/writing abilities. Please, please *begging on knees here as I wait for my computer to crash on me again* don't give up!
person redtatsu
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I would trully love it if you finished this story. I feel terrible that I haven't left a review beforehand. Better late than never. Please continue this.
person jazzy
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You bet I'de be pissed if you went and deleted this fic, It's great I love the slow build up of the boys and angst and the uncertainty of where they stand with eachother at moments is great stuff. Please continue this story, please it's truly a great peice of work, you don't slap them together like some authors and though I would love to see some lemon action going on between them it just wouldn't do right now where they are at, they need to talk more and understand themselves or what they really want or something... I really think this is a great story you must continue it!
person jazzy
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Also if you want to start a new story then do it, but please don't delete Conditional, later you may find yourself inspired to write and finish what you started here, and it would bum you out if you had to start all over on this fic. Believe me when I say this.