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omg I am sooo loving this fic so far, love the way you have them thinking of each other and the way they were both scared and then how naru was all mad at Hokage for making Sasu sleep on the street...awwww and the reunion, I thought you would make it all, I dont know hard for them to talk or something, but I love the way you had naru tackling him and all then offering him to come home with him, and Sasu not having nightmares anymore, loving it cause I can picture it in my head and although Naru should be mad, the way Ive read the Manga so far shows me that naru never gives up on Sasu, even though he might later, have yet to get past 290 so ya dont know if it will change but i can see naru happy to have Sasu finally back and not wanting him to leave..adorable fic, love it cant wait for more and I thank you for a wonderful read, have been denied my internet access till my phone gets hooked up at the end of the month so am have withdrawels of Sasu/Naru goodness and love reading this, so had to leave a review, again hope to read an update soon, end of the month almost here and will have my access back...sighs with happiness...lol..good work, till next chapter much huggles and smiles Mija..:-)

i luv this story! and i like how u move between Sasuke and Naruto's POV. And a thought...is either Naruto or Sasuke going to walk in on Kiba and Kankurou cause that would be hot and halarious, anyway just a thought. I can't wait for your update!


Your newest friend, Zane.

Hello!

After reading the second chapter I think I'm ready to review. The story progresses well and the character are described and developed well.
I also think your style has become plainer and easier to read. In the first chapter I have a lot of trouble to follow your every thought. Too much excursive thinking without nearer explanation made it hard for me to grasp what you have meant. In the end I somewhat lost the plot.

But if you keep writing the way you did in chapter two, I think this fic is going to be awesome.

So long,
Nathaniel

This was a very nice read; a good length and well sculpted. The dialogue was good and the character interactions were very cute and funny. I just hope Naruto doesn't become a simpering love-struck fool; that's really tedious.
Anyway, I really enjoyed reading this; I hope to see more!

OMG!!! OMG! i loved it!!

i am waitinig for the next chapter! oh and is it NarutoXSasuke or SasukeXNaruto...nyah

anyways i loved it and i hope u will update soon!!

It's good. ^___^
More, more!

-Ryu <3

Ooh! This story is awesome! Please continue adding onto it! :3

Great job. First story or not, I'm loving it. Naruto's changed, Sasuke's back and the different way you're protraying everything is great. I was getting tired of the wimpy!Naruto, or the Naruto who had been a super genius from the start and never showed it. Everything was gradual and the process of growing up. Sasuke's not a super wimp either and yet it's obvious that he's changed. Perfect. And Kabuto was evil, but only partly evil, so all the better. I'm still a little pissed off that he turned out so evil when I liked him so much. I can't wait for the Uchiha/Uzumaki confrontation. If all of your chapters are like this one, you're going to have a wonderful story on your hands.