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April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's a great story, I absolutly loved it.
Best wishes and good luck.
Butterfly Beauty
Best wishes and good luck.
Butterfly Beauty
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November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
DAMMIT kinda cliffy? its a common way to end sumthin but its still annoying as hell. moving along, i request a notification email whenever you update this fanfic. my email is deannathx@comcast.net. if you don't update ill knock you upside your head.
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January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love you story. I'm usually not an Itachi and anyone fan; but your story is awsome. I like the female characters attitude...especially when she and Kisami argue. I can't wait to read more...if there is more.
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mary Sue is *never* a good thing, sorry.
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November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
why dont you update? its a really goos story so far
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September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved the story so far just curious wot the girls real name is LOL
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Two words. And it isn't 'good job'. MARY SUE.
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whoa this was the most awesome and enticing story i have ever read!!! Please keep up the work i am waiting to read on.
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Black Tiger; I've read your first chapter and found myself feeling as if i am in this moment. It is A compelling read and look forward to chapter two. Once I've become accustomed to reading the japenese words the literature will be even more enticing.As for your work... you should be proud of this work you have done.bravo to you.For a young developing writer you certainly know how to put words together to captivate audiences into this genra or causerie
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome!!!!!!!!!!