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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My friend and I got a 93, without knowing most of the answers (and skipping those), and basing it solely off the first half of your first chapter.
Try taking the test yourself, and make a decision later: http://www.angelfire.com/gundam/otto/grayswandir/mary-sue-test.html
Also try reading the wikipedia article on Sues, notably the "typical sues" section. Original characters, as a whole, are fine, but they need to be kept "in their place." People read fanfiction to see the characters the know and love grow and develop, not to discover an endless litany of a perfect person who fell into their world. Original characters should help the plot, not BE the plot. This should help in the future: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mary_Sue
Try taking the test yourself, and make a decision later: http://www.angelfire.com/gundam/otto/grayswandir/mary-sue-test.html
Also try reading the wikipedia article on Sues, notably the "typical sues" section. Original characters, as a whole, are fine, but they need to be kept "in their place." People read fanfiction to see the characters the know and love grow and develop, not to discover an endless litany of a perfect person who fell into their world. Original characters should help the plot, not BE the plot. This should help in the future: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mary_Sue
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You encounters story is awesome.
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I love the detail. Can't wait for the next chapter!