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person Ravenbell
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Blinkblink. Now that's a pairing I never thought about. But you got it to work. Great job! :)
person jennjennr
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hmm i like it. its realistic. a little odd but i can see it happening. i like the style of putting their similar thoughts into one paragraph, not breaking them up, i don't know why i just really like that, it seems to add to the tone of their shared confussion.
person Belle
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful. Very nice, I have a weakness for the Sakura/Neji pairings. This was a great story.