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by Sintari

schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh..my...god!
I've read my share of Neji/Hinata stories, but this, in my opinion, stands out above the rest
Unlike the others, it isn't about the kink of incest, or a random oneshot
It's about love, and normally that isn't really my style, but once I reached the end, my heart actually sank a little
maybe it's just me though lol
Nonetheless, you have an amazing talent for writing and I look at this couple in a whole different way now
Thnx so much :)
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh,My God.That Was Utterly Beautiful.I Had Tears In My Eyes.
person baby blues jaded
schedule March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A fantastic story! Beautiful and so very sad.
person aethra-caelis
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was simply beautiful. <3 I really do hope your sister's surgery went through well, and I believe it's a treat that she's reading this. ^_^

Loving the flitting transitions from one place/time to another, the passionate narration and snippets of dialogue. Very balanced and smooth. It was very pleasant to read.

Keep it up!
person arichang
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
... God dammit. I love your Neji/Hinata fics. You were the one who converted me. That was, again, beautiful. I love your writing. Damn. I can't think of any other word to describe it. It's just... beautiful.
person Vox
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That is so believable. The best NejiHina I've read so far. Thinking about writing more??
person Shadow Girl
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This has got to be one of the saddest, but well-written
Neji/Hinata fanfic I have ever read. I could feel the
emotions, it was incredible. Hope to see another piece
from you soon. This one was so good, I can't wait for
the next one... ^_^
person DeadUchiha
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was very good! A little sad though. (T-T) It would be easy to get wrapped up in this story if it was multi chaptered. I like the way you write this pairing. Very nice. (^-^)v
person wah
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, that was really sweet and thoughtful. I like how you described their relationship.