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October 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This was an awesome story. I love the take you had on why Naruto is the way he is. Please write more! I'm looking forward to an update.
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August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've never reviewed any stories on aff before, but I had to with this one. I've read many fanfictions before, but yours is one of the best written and beautiful. Very dark and complex. PLEASE continue with it!
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
poor naruto, i hope sasuke comes in the next chapter to make him feel better. Please update soon!!!
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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! it's so sad *cries*
please update soon
please update soon
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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my...
how can you do this to Naruto and Sasuke?? *cry* I never thought that someone could be so cruel... that's... horrible...
You are an excellent writter, but this?? WHY?? they don't deserve this! this poor Naruto! I almost cry as a read you fiction! Oh my! It's TOO sad!, I think I'm going to take a col shower and search for an other fic which can lift up my moral... Argh, I think I'm crying now! *cry*
well, if you write something else tell me, but not if its soo cruel with the two of them...
anyway *cry*
goodbye *sob*
how can you do this to Naruto and Sasuke?? *cry* I never thought that someone could be so cruel... that's... horrible...
You are an excellent writter, but this?? WHY?? they don't deserve this! this poor Naruto! I almost cry as a read you fiction! Oh my! It's TOO sad!, I think I'm going to take a col shower and search for an other fic which can lift up my moral... Argh, I think I'm crying now! *cry*
well, if you write something else tell me, but not if its soo cruel with the two of them...
anyway *cry*
goodbye *sob*
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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, i looove this story!! u made me soo curious as to what sasuke's gunna do to win naruto's trust and stuff... please update soon!
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sugoi! What an interesting story. I enjoy the first chapter, really long, I like it and I really like the way Naruto how his life was hard. It makes me feel so bad for him. Your story is really well written and beautiful even if it's sad. Unfortunately for me, chapter two was short but I really like it too, so I'm not complainning. Naruto's dream was really realistic and sad and full of blood but I totally enjoy it! I hope to see more onegai, this is a great story that you're doing, so please keep writing and I hope people will review your story, I want longer chapter! Keep doing your excellent work! Ja! ST
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this, I hope there will be another chapter..I wanna know what happens **pouts...stomps feet**
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg...if you leave this as a one shot I will come home to you and torture you in all possible ways..so don't..!
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
CONTINUE IT CONTINUE IT CONTINUE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! IF YOU DON'T I'LL EMAIL YOU REPEATEDLY BEGGING YOU TO DO SO!!! Lol but in all sincereity your story is wonderous, please dont end it here! I haven't a fic that has take quite this angle before so i'm holding it to you to see your fic through to the end ^_~ You wouldn't let someone whi adores your work down would you? o.o *puppy eyes* Lol I'll even try to help you out with it! I'mma offerin to be your own personal BETA ^ ^ Lol think about it =D You got my email addy so when ya can let me know whats up ^ ^ i really did enjoy this first chapter, you got me sad! Not nice! but then again.. it was >_>.. as far as plot development goes, lol so keep up the good work! I swear i will result to drastic measures if you don't continue this story!!!! *Walks away wondering what in the world she could do that qualified as a 'drastic measure*.. I think I'm screwed in that department... Tehehe Ja ne!! Always, Kerrisa, aka Lil_Kitsune