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DON'T YOU DARE LEAVE THE STORY ENDING THERE!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE IT'S REALLY GREAT!!!!!!

I have so many reasons why you should continue this fic but since i'm too lazy to type them all out i'll just settle for a PLEASE CONTINUE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

oh and one more thing... i'm glad sasuke told sakura off like that i think she deserved it ! i was rooting for him to just kill her but i think his words hurt her more than any weapon

Congratulations on the commencement of your first yaoi fanfic. I think you're doing a great job. I loved it and I can't wait for the next chapter. I am looking forward to seeing what Sasuke is going to do and what will happen with training the next day, ooh and the mission. I'm also curious to see how Sakura is going to act with this new knowledge and her status of being 'dead' to Sasuke. There were a couple of points when I wanted to cry, but alas I don't cry too easily. I liked the stories about his scars etc. I think that it is the little details that make a good story. I appreciate how you give the stories a affect on Naruto's life. Instead of just going, yeah he gets attacked and thrown in a river to die, you put that it made him apprehensive to water and getting on the boat in Wave Country. It gives the explanations more presense. For some twisted reason I am a massive fan of stories where Naruto is tortured in one way or another. I think it makes the good things that happen to him more rewarding to read. In some weird way I guess.

This is definately a fave story now. Hope to see the second chapter as soon as you can release it.
xoxox shadow

i cried. the whole time. but still i want an update! as, i am sure, does everyone else! and if they don't, i will call forth all my alter-egos!!!