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*Dies of laugther* Something like that would happen to Sasuke if Naruto was around XD

Kudo ^-^

~Ria ^.~

omg! that is hallarious! *steals seventh comment virganity* im goig to have to read the other story~ ^^:

Huh?.....That's it?......What the hell was the point of that? They fall off a cliff and suddenly that's the end of the fic? That little bit doesn't even qualify as a full One-Shot. No offense but you need to put more thought into developing your plots or add some more chapters. Lack of plot is acceptable in PWP's, which this clearly not the case, but your warning included mild Shounen-ai but as with other points I made, your claim was found lacking. However, to your credit, I found relatively few grammatical and spelling errors. In the future I hope you put more effort into your fics.

LoL. That was cute. I especially like how you started and ended it on the same word. Hey! You should do a series of oneshots like that! It'd be like your own personal challenge!!

That was cute (^-^)v

And? and?! what happens next? more maybe? this could be some thing good! is it a deathly fall to their death? lol what happens next!!! i must kno!!! XDDD

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Oh my god. I loved that. Lol~ After a hard night's work of homework reading that just made me burst out into laughter. I have this complete inability to write humour as well as anything shorter than 4000 words, which is what makes me really envious and respectful of you guys who can write drabbles. Just one small error. It should be 'coal black', if I got your meaning right.

As for the storyline, I hope you leave it just as it is. It's lovely!

Hoping to read more from you and thanks for the magic!