AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Pet

by Macht

person ROSiE~!
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YO ^^, i luv the lemonnnnn~!!! *droole*...but....pairing's a...little.....*twitch*....^^;;;;;yah...., but it's pretty sweet lemons ^^. maybe describe more?? X3
person LoveUsagi
schedule February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It looks interesting, please countinue^___^
person Sekkei
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok One is Sasuke but who is the other pursuer lol?
Update soon please ^^!
person vivacious
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you're such a tease!!!! i can't wait for the next chapter. keep it up!
person hyperkaoru
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMHFG! That's yummy! *q*
person Anon
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow... That ending was a real surprise. In my mind, I saw Sasuke and Naruto, not Itachi and... is it Naruto? Now I'm really curious to see if it is!
Your writing is beautiful. I greatly enjoyed the imagery you presented with minimal descriptions that speak volumes. I can't wait to see where this is going! Update as soon as you are able, but take your time. Hurried writing is low-quality writing.
person Alya_de_Lacour
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Completely unexpected! I loved it!
person blueinferno
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOOOH I LOVE! I bet it's Itachi/Naruto...but i'm not sure...PLEASE UPDATE SOON! this is awesome...btw...is the captive a virgin? *puppy dog eyes*
person sansty
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooooo! who's the pet"?! ^.^