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...... OMG!!!! UPDATE THIS DAMN THING!!!!!!!! I read this on fichaven and loved it and I have been patiently waiting for AN UPDATE!!!!! pleaaassseeee update!

that was kinda sad in the way it ended, but i think you should go on

this is genious! i love this story and it is the only story i will ever read if you promise to contineu updateing!!!i need this story...it's the only good work of fiction for naruto and inuyahsa that i have ever seen and it deserves a chance! so onegai....don't let this story fall away and not let us readers have the chance to experience your beautiful storywritting! because this is the best fanfic on AFF and i would love it if you updated and good luck in your writting!!! ^_^ ja ne!

I love this story, don't you have this on fichaven too!If you do when is you goin to put the next chapter up?

Yo, pretty cool monologue/SOC you had going there - almost poetic. This is the same story on MM.org right?

Anything to say? Not really - apart from having nice language, suitable style, and overall a good read.

*Bunny Eyes* Next chappie? Pwease?

Damn that was sad. Had me starting to tier up. Plz next chappie

Omg...i read this when u first posted it back when the anime series wasnt really far in the us and i was really lost but now i get it...your story has so much pashon in it its as if u have experience exactly what naru has! I meam this made me cry and i hardly ever cry!! Well anyway u have 2 update soon when u do can u email me? i cant wait for your next chapie! I give it a 13 out of 10 oh and i am claiming to be your bigest fan! For every chapter even an authors not i will review but only if u update!!! K? your bigest fan Shema

They're going to find out he was innocent right?! He wont die a traitor?? Please update, I'm BEGGING you! I want to know how they react when they find they let an innocent man die. Ohhh, poor Naruto. I can hardly type I'm crying so hard! Oh you absolutly must update! Damn my nose is running, gotta go, please update!

WAAAHHHHHHH!!!! Oh God I cried so much for Naruto after reading this! Well, not physically, but mentally I was bawling my eyes out! It's just so cruel that no one actually cried for Naruto, so I decided to make sure that at least somebody cried for him. Did Tsunade at least cry for him? I would think that if Princess Fuun (that is, the character that plays Princess Fuun) heard about Naruto's death that she would cry for him, or maybe Tsunami from the Wave Country would cry for him...
Anyway, I have to say that this fic was done really well and that the ideas that went into the incorporation of spirit and life energy were amazing. It seems to have similarites in how the energy system in Yuu Yuu Hakusho works, at least with the spirit and life energy aspect. Anyhow, I really don't see any problems with your spellings or punctuation, nor with how you interpreted and utilized the Naruto-verse information. Frankly, how that is handled should be solely up to the author himself, so continue doing the good job that you're doing!

i dont understand the kagome part but thats so sad i hate them all and i hope they all die
yeah naruto should come backe 3 years later when kohana needs his help to survive but he wont because they left him die
muh ha ha ha ha ahha ha ha ha