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June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow. that was really really sad i cried a lot. I'm not used to doing that when i read fanfics. So now you have to update because i want to see what happens next.
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was. . Cruel. I don't think I really like this. . Sorry, it's just. Damn, Naruto isn't - no, wouldn't be hated that much. And how the hell are you gonna stick Kagome in this?. . Kind of curious. . But I don't think I'll continue reading this. Really good writing though. I hope you continue for those that like it. Gomen, just not what I was looking for.
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is wonderful...keep writing
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How are the villagers going to react when the realize they left Naruto to die after he SAVED his team mates? Cause Kakashi, Sakura, and Sasuke will tell them what really happened right? That they were attacked by enemies not Naruto, and that Naruto saved them.
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. You need to post the rest -real- soon! God, that hinata part suprised the hell out of me.
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm begging you, please update. I read this story when you originally published it, and I've read ch2 on Fichaven. Now I really want ch3 please. I can't tell you how much I love this story. It's moving the way you delve into the dirtyness of human nature, and still manage to create such a beautiful story. Please continue.
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i think that was an awsome first chapter i like ready xovers if the wiritin can keep me intrested inof in the story in ur first chap did just that i would really like to read if naruto really died n i cant wait 4 the inu cast to come in ^^ please update soon ^^