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by Deathbyshuriken

person hinshihoushi
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was very good. Very well written and I really enjoyed it. Hope you decide to do a sequel on the aftermath as to how they recover or if they even do. Thanks for sharing!
person MeLaiya
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG This is so good. Please you have got to hurry and update. Im beggin you, please update a.s.a.p.
person DevilLived
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter. The fox is slowly breaking Sasuke and Naruto, eh? Will they go for help before its too late?! Update soon!
person Qoy
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WoW! I reeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaalllllllllyyyyyyyyyyyy like this fic.
Hope u update soon cause i'm hypnotized. What will happen to cute slave!Sasuke? Will they do kinky Master/Slave thingys?

I loooovveee it.

Well done!
person random person
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE SOON! I love this ^_^
person Vox
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What?! Don't just stop like that! Write mooooore!!!
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
CX wooohoooooo! hot lemony stuff! and a cool story with it!
person Elric Maxwell
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Now this is interesting, Sasuke gettin' it good! I guess I like it either way, but it is more fun when they switch up. I hope you update soon! ^_^ EM
person Kisu-chan
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My God, that was amazing!
person Kusachu
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You said, "I'll knock your fucking socks off." And the best part is you can actually say that! I am full of glee as read this. I'm so happy i am only the second chapter! I can tell you are the type that will just keep me wanting to read more. Damn you! The waiting is the worst part! *grumble grumble* Would a giant fireball be sufficient to set your nether regions ablaze? *insert -Katon Goukakyuu no Jutsu- here* Looking forward to chapter two.

~Dead