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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O.O... wow. that was good. really good. please say there is more. your writing is so intense.
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
SQEAUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love Kyuubi!Naruto so much! I love how possessive and territorial is he, especially when it comes to Sasuke. Funny how that has been coming out more often in the manga, too. I like how you've done this, with the whole Nine-year cycle and how everything is different. So far you have a very interesting plot going, do you plan to expand on it?
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!
Please?
Normally my reviews are longer than this but I'm lazy today.
Please update soon?
rachi
Please?
Normally my reviews are longer than this but I'm lazy today.
Please update soon?
rachi
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, great fic!
I'm so sick of seeing those helpless-Naruto-being-violated-by-evil-Sasuke fics!
Good job! ^~
I'm so sick of seeing those helpless-Naruto-being-violated-by-evil-Sasuke fics!
Good job! ^~
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
.......its ok though I can't see the kyubbi being aggresive like that if anything
I would think he would want revenge and what better way then start killing....
mmm but then again what better way to start his revenge by finishing off the Uchia(sp?) Clan.
I would think he would want revenge and what better way then start killing....
mmm but then again what better way to start his revenge by finishing off the Uchia(sp?) Clan.
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
could I marry your fic?! that way I could re-read it everyday!!...O.O'
Oh...Um...sry, I lost it there! but this fic is AMAZING! I love it! Update more soon!!!
Oh...Um...sry, I lost it there! but this fic is AMAZING! I love it! Update more soon!!!
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very smexy! i can't wait! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WTF?! Kyuubi sounds like that little green dude from star wars... you know, the one with the pointy ears. *horrified shivers*
Anyways, nice story. Yay for Kyuubi popping Sasuke's cherry (I always wanted to say that :3 ).
Poor Naruto... how is he going to explain this in the morning...*snickers*
I don't really have some kind of useful advise for you except *grabs a torch* KEEP WRITING! ;)
ja~ ^^V
Anyways, nice story. Yay for Kyuubi popping Sasuke's cherry (I always wanted to say that :3 ).
Poor Naruto... how is he going to explain this in the morning...*snickers*
I don't really have some kind of useful advise for you except *grabs a torch* KEEP WRITING! ;)
ja~ ^^V
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I knew you'd get lots of reviews by the time I got back from work. Such a sexy story. I'm a fan of Kyuubi and Sasuke. It's a hot pairing. I'm kinda disapointed that sauke didn't resist that much. He's such a slut.
*spread some kerosene around Death.by.shuriken*. That should burn your ass enough ne?
*spread some kerosene around Death.by.shuriken*. That should burn your ass enough ne?
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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*gapes*
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continue......please..
*gapes*
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continue......please..