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Oh, wow! I love the story! The characters, their behaviour and thinking patterns, the story structure so far, and the mood of the story. Ummm... Will you continue it? I hope you wil...
I want so much to happen, and I'm really curious of how you'd write the whole story, but I won't start listing everything.

Thanks for writing and sharing it!

great fic! I wonder when/what will knock naruto out of this "never enough" mindset he's got now. I can see him going and traing with the local tean and blowing them out of the water and either getting reality or thinking again "too easy going: like you said with the chuunin exam

hope you ad more to this soon. it is a good story but you have not got to them meeting yet. keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!

i love this pairing few people ever put shika and naru together

is there going to be more ?? I love it so far - though i want to see the ShikaNaru pairing !! Poor naruto - to wrapped up in his own little world to notice things

More! Please! What happens next? Do they find him? Is Michiko really okay or is he part of the Akatsuki? This inquiring mind really needs to know.

ShikaNaru is pretty hard to come by and this fic is pretty good, which is bad for you because i'm officially demanding more, and i have a pack of rabid hamsters that can be pretty persuasive.

I can't really go and judge this particular Oc character by just one introduction, after in your winter release you have an Oc as the Akatsuki leader and that man is just too cool for words, so yes I will give this new kid a chance. As for the rest of the chapter...Well I really like the fact that Jiraiya's thoughts were shown a bit more than usual. Another part I really enjoyed was finally having Sasuke use his brain for once...I mean I think many of us ut there believe that the Uchiha was a corrupt clan in a lot of ways any way. And I also think that many of us can agree that when it comes to Itachi..there's more to him then meets the eye. Of course you've already delved into a lot of that with you other story...but this isn't about that. Any way can't wait too see more Shikamaru action... he's such a awesome character in a his LAZY Glory and as I'm sure you've probably figured out I really like the way in which you write him. In fact there is only one other writer that stands out in mind mind when it comes to Shikamaru...but never mind that/

Keep it coming!

hiya! I must say that you do a lot better about writing in English than most other foreign people I've seen on the site. You could still use a beta though, some of your phrasing is a little awkward and there could be better word choices in some areas...for example Shino's coat is high collared, not a turtleneck. Finally, Mizu no Kuni is Water Country. Rain is one of the hidden villages, and there are a couple more you didn't mention like Hidden Grass and Hidden Waterfall. I have no idea what countries they correspond to though. And before you get a chance to get all indignant about the inaccuracy of English dubs, I watched Naruto subbed.

YATTA! Can't wait to read the next chapter!