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for Silent Observer

by Cepheus

person kenshinjunkie03 (too lazy to log in)
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hiya. just here to say i love your story sooooooo much. the plot is great and the characters are in character. and as for the whole itachi thing, once evil now redeemed. a good itachi is always better than a bad one.

anywho, love your story and i can't wait for the next update^_^V
person Mahsell
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Itachi–kun innocent but still dark

This fic is so awesome. I can hardly
wait for the next chapter. I love all the
angst, and well I just love it.

Mashell
person hinshihoushi
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes I definitely enjoyed this chapter too. Hope you had a chance to read that other story and liked it. my name cam from a site regardin miroku from inuyasha (had something to do regarding perverted monks). If you want a good site to check out technique names, character, translated manga, Nartuofan . com (minus spaces of course) is a great source.
person mokoshna
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, that's a rather unexpected pairing, but I liked it ^^.
You didn't rush in, that's good; I like pairings that take their time to florish.
Please continue !
person Soul of Emerald
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woaaa... such a nice written prologue of a promising story :)

I'm a sucker for rare pairings (in all fandoms) and I haven't read a ShikaNaru story before, and this story of yours have caught my interest! I would like to see how their relationship develops. As I said before, this part was very well written and you kept everyone in character (I don't think Sasuke was that much OOC, it was needed)

I'll be waiting for the next chapter!

Ta ta for now!

Soul of Emerald~
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cute. I liked it. :) So, where are we going with this? Update soon.
person aurora
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked the story please keep writing I love pairings you don't see everyday.
person kallipso
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
To troublesome. You better update.
person I.S.S.
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I love Shikanaru! You are my hero (tries to tackle you)

(coughs) Ahem, anyways. This was a really well-written fic and the characters were pretty in-character. I hope you update soon...

I'll give you a cookie.

person Lanier
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter. I feel bad for poor Naruto. He worked so hard and Sakura is such a meanie that she couldnt even come see how he was. Sometimes I really hate her! I cant wait for the next chapter.