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for Silent Observer

by Cepheus

person T_B
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this was an extremely well written and long chapter. A combination I absolutely adore ^_^... You've managed to create a very detailed insight of what is going on in Naruto-tachi's minds and where they are standing right now. There should be more authors who really think about the initial situation of the characters in their fics. So, kudos to you, pal! I've never really thought about ShikaNaru, but your story kinda pulls me in and I'm curious as to where you will take it. Please, don't let us wait for too long, though! ^_~ I'm really looking forward to the next update! O-genki de.
person liankitty
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was awesome! Well written and interesting, the deviation from the original Naruto plot was well thought out and the scenes with Shikimaru were cute but not overly OOC. I'm really interested to see where this will go; hope to see more soon.
Thanks for writing!
person Lyn
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think that you have a great stroy! I love shikanaru and can never find any long stories with this pairing in it. So I am really hoping that you continue this story and update soon!
person AndzMinx
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your story is reaaly good so far and as a plus you are using a rare couple shikanaru who could ask for more, so if you don't continue I will hunt you down. :D
person hinshihoushi
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I'm glad to see a shikanaru fic. You're right about the few that are out there are oneshots. There is one multi chapter called fading scars thats on aff too. I look forward to reading more of your stroy and thanks for sharing!