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by loche606

person Rei
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Im confused....
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nyaaa yesssss!!! ohh ohh ohhhh pleeeaaaassseee renren, writewrite the next one pleaseplease!! aaaaah i'm glad my comment about you goin fluffy made you decide you had to go kyuubi on sasu's ass again muwahahahahahahahaaaa >:D

*ahem* anyway, loved the chap, and shika and chouji's nonchalant/troublesome reactions to seeing them *together* lol

MORE. NOW. PLEASE!
*bats lashes w/kitty smirk*
~ crys
person Niara-Kun
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that chapter with Kyuubi actually kinda...scared me..but i wuz mostly confused so i didnt cry 4 my mommy ^.^
u ROCK!
SasuNaru 4 EVA!!!!!
ima goofy goober!

|x~* Niara-kun *~x|
person Neko-Chan
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Naru =^^= Kawaii!!! Very cute!!!
Great chapter!! Cant wait for more!!
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*squeee* renren!! sasuke said 'my naru' he said MY NARU!! *superglomp* ahhh.. it is kinda funny to me, that this chapter was actually pretty fluffy considering how it started lol.. especially after my "you love to hurt the boys you love" remark to you :p i love it either way heeheehee.. nya nya, don't get creatively backed up now ^__~ write more!!!

~ crys
person blisblop
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh.Very good.I reaaaaaaaally like this,Kyubbi(shit damn lost my brain here!)is a little blood thirsty eh.Well he will snap its not only naruto's decicion eh?
person xBunni
schedule August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Maaa!! Ren-san!!! OO Please uppy soon ne~? *sobs* It's sad na no da~ Demo, I hope naru-chan is going to be the only uke.. *hint hint* ^^ Ja, gambatte ne~!! I'll be waiting for the next chappy!!
person Houseki
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hot damn! Naruto was vicious to Sasuke! Poor Sasuke-kuuun!!! T__T hehe besides that, it was hella hot...man sounds like Sasuke lost a hella lot of blood man! And Naruto coming to, at the end, poor thing. Now what's going to happen? He needs to get Kyuubi under control so he and Sasuke can mate...not Sasuke and the Kyuubi :p

Love ya always!

Me
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*superglomp* omt, sooooooooo hot! like whoa, naruto got really freaky.. that was awesome.. one of my favorite parts was: Sasuke was having a hard time breathing. He couldn’t tell if he liked it or not. If he went by his erection, that was throbbing between them, then he did, but his brain was still racing.

yes.. so great.. but the ending w/the note was sad.. PLLLEEEEEEAAAAAASSSEEEE write the next one soon! *dinner plate-sized pooly eyes*

~ crys
person blue_genjutsu
schedule June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'd say that was Kyuubi and not Naruto that is clawing at Sasuke's window! Can't tell if Sasuke understands the difference. :)