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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sweeeeet... I love a dopey and sarcastic Naruto... is Sasuke hinting that he likes Naru? Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! Lemon please!!!!!!!
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's so short! WAAAAH!!!!! *cry* TTATT
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Naruto's narrative is really refreshing! You write him extremely well. I was chuckling at his descriptions the entire time. :D
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Kudos to you!
You tried a really different approach from most ppl, that itself is a risk, but you did well! It's light-hearted and funny for a change instead of uber-angst (not that I don't like angst but everything starts blurring together once you've read fics of the same genre 50000 times and over!)
I really like it. I just looooove a sexually frustrated, goofy Naruto and the way his thots dart around aimlessly are amusing as hell... the characterization is great and there is very little OOCness, I couldn't stop smiling the entire time I was reading it...
Please ignore your other reviewers and listen to only me... update soonest! ^^'''''''''''
You tried a really different approach from most ppl, that itself is a risk, but you did well! It's light-hearted and funny for a change instead of uber-angst (not that I don't like angst but everything starts blurring together once you've read fics of the same genre 50000 times and over!)
I really like it. I just looooove a sexually frustrated, goofy Naruto and the way his thots dart around aimlessly are amusing as hell... the characterization is great and there is very little OOCness, I couldn't stop smiling the entire time I was reading it...
Please ignore your other reviewers and listen to only me... update soonest! ^^'''''''''''
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love you update !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Good? Good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awww this is cute naruto's being so... narutoish man you must continue !!!
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha, I loved this! Naruto's such a spaz, lol. I liked all his speculating about Sasuke's sexual preferences and how excited he got when Sasuke agreed to go out with him... then his lame attempt to cover it up.
And you'd better continue this! *pulls out baseball bat*
And you'd better continue this! *pulls out baseball bat*
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was a Sasuke POV fic at first from the story description but I like your rendition of Naruto too! It has all the makings of making me go "awwwwww" from the fluffy angst. Is there such a thing as fluffy angst? *giggle* But anyway it makes me happy! I haven't laughed this hard since Chasing Naruto which is another fantastic fic as far as I'm concerned. *feeds you chocolates* Can't wait to see what happens next. And do you mind my asking, is this SasuNaru or NaruSasu...????? I really wanna know!!!! And please say that therell be more coming.... I love how Naruto fancies Sasuke without being all simpering and lovedovey abt it.... ^_^
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really hope that you contiune this, 'cause i think that this is gonna be fun to read.. (wide grin)
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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