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Wow your writing style is... really really different..!!!!! o_O Reminds me of OO83, or AkaiTsume... both of whom I worship day and night, but you're fast joining them on my fav list ^^ Love the heavy sarcasm and Naru-chan's spaceyness..... totally suits him, he HAS to think like that because he's such a spontanous sort of person. WAAAAAAAI GIMME UR NEXT CHAPTER OR I WILL EAT YOUR BABY!!!!!!!!! You should be proud of yourself because the last time I reviewed a fic was two years ag (gasp!) but I couldnt resist!!!!!!1
(inhales sharply) Sorry, all that laughing must have knocked something loose. Ill strop rambling now =)

Well, this one is just... bad.
I sincerely doubt you are Masashi Kishimoto, the creator of Naruto. First of all, you refer to yourself as "authoress." Mr. Kishimoto is male. Your make Naruto a self-insertion; that is an unforgivable sin.

Holy shit, that was great. My roommate just came in to find me chuckling evilly at the screen and ran out of my room screaming.
That's exactly how I pictured the way Naruto would think for any fic is written in his POV, all the black humor and sarcasm and self denial while admitting to himself he finds Sasuke teme a uberhottie instead of fawning all over him like most SasuNaru fics do.
Congrats, you have captured yourself a fan... ^_~

I was actually a passerby and I wasn't going to review (I do like this fic tho, I do! I'm just not a reviewing kind of person....) but the quamp person is just too a) fucking funny b) fucking stupid because this IS a fanfiction community isn't it? I doubt the real maker of Naruto will ever come here or if he can even read and write English fluidly. You ARE stupid, quamp. Sorry, but you are making a huge fuss out of sth so obvious *shrug*

I like it! A bit au, but the characters are still... well... naruto and sasuke. :) And Naruto really IS puppy dog cute. I look forward to the continuation!

this is really good. It's a great intro makes me beggin for more... which i shall do unashamedly.. MORE PLEASE MORE!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!
now on to more constructive stuff. i like how it's in Naruto's POV but i was wondering if u'r gonna switch it up or keep it the way it is. either way is fine but u know curiosity....
Reeeaalllyyy weel done... i'm impressed!

I think I'm in love with you, and I'd gladly bear your children so MY offspring can carry your writing genes. I'm going to send you an email now and fangirl further ^^

omg i just loved that
you got to update this soon roflmao
i couldnt stop laughing at some bits...
and i love the style u write.... the dialogue is sharp and edgy and the sarcasm and self-berating is done well..... for your first fic, it is awfully goood (it IS your first fic right, i didn't see anything else on your authors page?)
most POV fics are straightforward and boring but you did well......!!
eagerly awaiting next chapter.
thx!

this was hilarious. I don't think anyone has captured Naruto's spacey-ness quite the same way that you did. I would be ecstatic if you decided to write more.

Hahahaahah, this is great! oh, poor little naruto! XD please write more!