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for Down Boy

by babyjam

person PJ
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMGWTFBBQHAHAHA
...that was hilarious, esp the measuring tape... i get the impression that sasuke's a big boy tho
fucking classic
please cont'! i'll feed you orange juice and oreos when u do!!!!!!! (note when, not if....) *salute*
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is awsome..couldnt stop laughing.. looking forward to the next chapter
person rune
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Every sentence is a wise-ass remark...
Naruto's just too funny weaving between unsuccessful angst and glee... so frustratingly cute! I feel so bad for him, but it's oh so satisfying to read....
When is Naruto moving in with Sasuke? I demand it! More trouble bewing no doubt....
Hehehehe I really like the intro, really has me panting for more~ more pwease~~~
person raina
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this story is so cute so far, u must continue!
can't write any more coz i'm too busy laughing, hee..
person leigh
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooh I'm the first reviewer? Awesomeness! This is one of THE funniest damn things I've read in a while, and believe me, I've read a lot. I like the self-delsional Naruto and all the sarcasm, and the only thing I can complain about is IT'S TOO DAMN SHORT!!!!!!!!!!! I'll sue you if you don't continue. Yes I will.
person sakya
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you can't end it like that! ;__; what happens after? *cries*
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So far I am loving this. Just the right blend of description, action and humor.
Eagerly awaiting more.
person DANA
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked your story alot.... can't wait for the next chapter
person rhianna
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Noooooooooooo you can't leave us hanging like that. You're evil and I hate youuuuuu!!!!!!!!

Other than that, please accept this cookie of adoration and awe with my compliments.