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by Trollmia

person Kim
schedule March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Must. Finish. Story. x3
person b
schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
argh, a cliffie.Sobs.
person roseying
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Finally got to the dance part! Anyway, I wonder if Sasuke and Naruto are already friends in this fic. It's going to be interesting to see their interaction. Please update soon.
person Geda
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*danceydance*
This story breaks my composure and makes me giddy, so you shall write lots more. Lots and lots. Ja. *nods head*
person Ayame
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a Very interesting story. this is the first time I have ever read a Naruto story that is in today's seting. This is also the only story that I've read with this pairing. Keep up the good writing aand keep the chpts coming. =D
person roseying
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hehe...I love the opening: "'Why?' Hinata asked as she stirred in her tea cup. ‘Must face the puppy eyes…. Must face them with firm decision not to go… must face them… ARGGGH I hate puppy eyes!!!’" Hinata cracks me up in this fic. So glad you finally updated. A little disappointed because Part 6 implied Part 7 was going to have the dance scene in it, but then again, convincing a conservative Hinata and an antisocial Sasuke does need a part of its own--so you did your part as the author well (just please don't push my hopes like that again--don't know if I can take it ^_^). Also happy you're finally getting around to updating your other fics again, was wondering what happened to you but am very happy to know they're not getting discontinued and that you're alive. Keep it up--I look forward to the next chapter!

person barara
schedule February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Haha YAY! You updated! *cheers like a fangirl* Anyways.. I like Gaara! He's a scary oniisan! well not blood related oniisan XD
person Puppy
schedule February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
^^.....I love your story It rocks so much
person blisblop
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey,whats up? Hope you are surviving the winter (full spectrum light works for long winter,pet stores have cheap ones for snakes ect),I live in Canada and can feel your pain,no spring,roast for weeks then, boom, winter again.
Well this is further along,yeah,get them blasted and in some half decent clothes,fuck the suits, ugh really....unless is bespoken sharkskin that is.Even then,urgh.wear a noose everyday? hah ! No money is worth that. Happy to see you updated,this fic is funny.....but get Sasuke out of those suits...and give the devil his due!
person blue
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yaahhh!! im so happy you finally updated i love the pairin sasu/hina they just go together in some strange good way!^^ THE DREADED LAUGH OF TEMARI AND TENTEN!!! FEAR THEM! oh i can not wait till you put up the next chapter. you can just tell its gonna end with a few rounds of beer, some flashin lights, and maybe leadin to a little lemon if were lucky....i wonder if kankuro is right...