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August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please please please pleaaaaaaaaae update soon *begs on knees*
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July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Neji's dialogue seems rather OOC, but besides that, it's a good story so far (I've only read the first chapter yet.) This is taking place after the time jump, right? Exactly how old is everyone in this?
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February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good story filled with suspense update when you can
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February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm. The first chapter was really erotic, the description of Hinata's white neck and her whiter body were a really telling image. However, I do think Neji acts a bit too "evil for the sake of being evil" after that, it seems to be pushing it a bit.
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update! Yay for Hyuugacest ! LOL but no seriously, i like your style and the story flows pretty well although Hinata seems OOC. As for Neji...sadly, it seems like something he would actually do being his before-chuunin-exam self.
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, please have more raping, please! >w
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey! When will the next chapter come out? I like it!
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update update update!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story so far. Here's hoping that fucker Neji gets his face caved in!
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, now this is very interesting! You made Neji such a bastard! I can't wait to see what you have cooked up for the next chapter...I think Neji'll be really pissed when he finds out that his cuz is staying with Naruto! ^_^ Update soon! EM