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for Last Eternity In Your Lifetime

by marjul21

person oohshiny
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ehhh? i dont get it..... it might just be cuz of the name akito tho, i keep thinking of furuba oO anyway, couldyou email me when you update this story? my email's deannathx@comcast.net
person Kahuri-chan
schedule February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You have so got to continue this it's just getting good. What happened to seperate Naruto and Sasuke? Why's Sasuke a Vamp now? And why has, at least it looks this way to me, searched for Naruto for most likely centuries? The questions the questions that must be answered I must know lol. In any case keep up the good work and Please please PLEASE update soon. Saraba.
person Akuma Sora
schedule February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really liked it. It was good and I've been waiting for a Naruto vampire fic. Can't wait for the next chapter!
person Vanessa
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yahhh....your story is so good!!!!

Please up date soon...
person souri kinomoto aka sasuke/naruto/sasuke fan number 1
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update update UPDATE! Please continue writing this story it's sooooo good so far. I really love the fact that you made Sasuke a vampire. (i love fics where he is one cause it's so cool). I can't wait for Fox and Raven's first meeting of eachother in this time (raven is my nickname for Sasuke cause of his hair and I think you can guess who fox is). Maybe you could make reincarnations of the others or atleast Iruka-sensei and Kakashi-sensei cause I like them, especially when they're together cause they're just like fox and raven (iruka-sensei is like fox; kakashi-sensei like raven). but if you don't that's fine. i hope you update soon. ja ne.
person blisblop
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sounds cool,lets go!
person Anon
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay!!! a vamp-fic! but your story is too tiny! give a longer update next time ok? no wonder there's no review even though your story is good! and give a damn clifhanger nexttime! that's what makes readers come back!!!
person the_True_Silver
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice start.. lots of potential
person rehobeachlady
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I do hope you continue with this. Alwasy have loved a good Naruto/Vamp story and yours has a good beginning. It's well written and I look forward to future chapters!!!
person Vox
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This seems nice. Please make next chapter longer and explain more about how sasuke became a vampire. :)