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February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg I soo love this, what happened to Naru baby??? and awwwwww the scene with Sasuke asking Kakashi if it was true??? made me cry, and the part with Sakura too, its nice to read that she finally realized how much Naruto meant to her and when he wasnt around it was like the sun stopped shining, I love it, please write more?? pretty please with a naked Sasu/Naru on top?? lol, tyvm for that great read, look foward to more, till then huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love this fic! cant wait to know what happen next!
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February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You do not suck, what gave you that idea? Anyway, does Sasuke ever find naruto? What happened to him? Was he kidnaped? Why did he just disapear like that? please update asap so that i can find out. =3
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was a nice start. It's very original too. You don't see many stories with Naruto being the one to disappear and Sasuke going out to find him. It should be interesting to see how you develop this.
One thing though, please check your spelling, or rather, make sure the word you're using is the correct one (i.e. feet vs. feat). No mistakes in grammar that I can recall, which is amazing.
Keep up the good work!
One thing though, please check your spelling, or rather, make sure the word you're using is the correct one (i.e. feet vs. feat). No mistakes in grammar that I can recall, which is amazing.
Keep up the good work!
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great start! can't wait to read more! please update soon!
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know I was just thinking that there were no good Naruto fics being written anymore, but you have renewed my faith in the fandom. I love your beginning, you have a few spelling problems but nothing that can't be fixed quickly and nothing that takes away from the quality of the story. I hope that you update soon, because I've been waiting for someone to finally write a good story that actually gets updated regularly and that gets finished. Great job
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, so great start! ^^ I can't wait to read more about it.
Because it's better for you that this is not gonna be a one-shot or a discontinued fic. I love it too much!
Where is Naruto? What happened to Itachi?!
Please, update soon, pretty please with cherry on top! >.<
CP
Because it's better for you that this is not gonna be a one-shot or a discontinued fic. I love it too much!
Where is Naruto? What happened to Itachi?!
Please, update soon, pretty please with cherry on top! >.<
CP
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was so amazing.. please tell me there is going to be more? I really am intrigued and want to know what has happened. You wrote and incredible chapter. Please I would love to read another chapter.
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you don't suck, i am just very sad that this finished already here!
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it was well written i could actually visualize the sadness and i felt my heart twist when i read about the sadness.............. BUT..... there were some grammatical errors like writing 'they' when u meant 'the' it bugged me after a while.... there were other stuff but generally i think it rocked.