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Wow! That was a awsome chapter I love your style and I really want to see what Naruto's been doing all these years! Please update soon, or I'll cry!

This was a great first chapter, a lot of them are slow and disinteresting but this grabbed my attention right from the start. It's very well written and promises to become a very good story; I hope to see more soon!
Thanks for writing!

It looks like an interesting story, I hope that you will continue to write it. I really like your writing style. There is some mistakes sometimes but noting big, just re-read your story before posting it. Otherwise, I love this first chapter and the fact that Naruto had left, there are so many questions we can think about. So, it will be wise to continue your story. I'll be waiting for your next update. Ja!