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by crowincarnate

person Vague
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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person mji
schedule November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
... *nosebleed*

not only cause i'm a pervert, just.. for general awesomeness. this story is made of love and win. very epic in deed. <3
schedule November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn Gaara is like the worst parent....i love kyo. that baby seems to be more on crack then on sake. Kesuke is cute too, with the pile of wish granting dirt. i don't think i would leave it either if i had some. Naruto is like a mother hen. i really enjoyed the part where neji grabs gaara and kisses him moments before his impending wedding to hinata.
person ochibi-chwan
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved the story! Now they can live happily ever after! ^^
I know this is going to sound kind of weird, but can you do a sequel with the kids? It's just that they are really really kute!! and it's been bothering me ever since you've introduced them of how their futures might look...so pretty please?
person Anon
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
-U- should do a KYOKES sequal and if u have 1 already please email the name of it to nijuichifan@yahoo.com

Kat
person blue
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that.was.so.good. hahaaa man i almost peed in my pants when kyo set sakura on fire!^^ that bad ass little kid! truth be told if i were gaara when i got back to the hotel while packin kyos and my things i would have busted out laughtin, ok thats just me. but yaah!! nejis gonna live with gaara and kyo back in suna!^^ good for them and if ya can please write more soon!
person chelzi
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
okay, this was cute. it was mildly insane, a little angsty, humerous, and just plain funny too. perfect! thanks for giving me something to smile about!~
person chiaki
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is such a great story. totally love kyo and kesuke! thanks so much!
person Tati
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Alright. The suspense is killing me. Is he going to get married or not? I can't take this stress!!!!

Update soon, please! **puppy eyes with a sniffle**
person NejixGaara SasukexNaruto r sexy!!
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOH I HOPE ITS NOT FINISHED, I WANT TO SEE HER HOUSE GO UP IN FLAMES. HA THAT WAS FUNNY I LIKED IT!