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November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOO! there must be more. Please update soon. i like where this is going but there is still a lot you can do as a writer pretaining to your grammar and style. And yes, I know that this is a fun piece and everyone is entitled to formulating their own style, but for the record this is not a flame. So, I'm not saying you suck but rather that if you plan on ever doing this seriously, there are some things you need to work out. Had this been a stand alone piece with no anime affiliation then a lot of what's going on would be lost in translation (but that's why it's a fanfic, lol)One other major issue you have is your description, in fact most fanfic writers do this anyway, because they take for granted that the audience knows the characters and the show. Persons who don't will be confused especially if the characters are OOC. But this is irrelevant i suppose, since fanfiction's target market is fans or people who are at least familiar with the anime written about. Anyway, overall i liked your fanfic and I hope to see more from you.
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November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Did i miss something?
Gaara meet Neji...and what happened to those two?
confusing......
Gaara meet Neji...and what happened to those two?
confusing......
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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! The story, IT LIVES!!
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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope for your own good that you havent stopped writing this...!
I Love this...Neji and Gaara^^
I Love this...Neji and Gaara^^
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November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh cliff-hanger..... THE HORROR...... Anyywayyyy I love the story and I cant wait for the next chapter.
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October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, so cruel, so cruel! I want to see what happens next.
I love Neji and Gaara. Especially Gaara. I would like to lick his face.
I love Neji and Gaara. Especially Gaara. I would like to lick his face.
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October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!!!! write more.
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September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My God!!!! I love this story so much...keep up the good work...
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September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! Just plainly awesome! I'm starting to tear up beacuse of the cliff hanger! Keep writing and update soon, ok?!
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September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I rather like this fic a lot. I don't usually go for Gaara/Neji fics but I was attracted to this one. Not that you've indicated that you wouldn't, but I would like it very much if you continued writing this fic. One thing though, there are a lot of grammatical errors and I was curious why you wouldn't have your co-author beta it for you. You have someone available so it wouldn't be a bad idea to use them.
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