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for The New Family

by crowincarnate

person Hizu-Chan
schedule February 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a rather interesting story! Please continue with it! I want to know what happens! XD
schedule February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's a very great beginning ! *drool* X3
Want MOOOORRREEE !!!
Can't wait to see the next chapter !

Hope you will update soon ^^
person Eldalote
schedule February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW. what an awesome idea, and so CUTE! >.
person green24
schedule February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome I always wanted to read somin where Gaara got pregnant. Update soon it sounds like a very interesting story.
schedule February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
DUDE!! That was awsome!!! So update!!! I need to know what happends!!!
person Shandy
schedule February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My first ever review here!!!! AND YOURS WAS THE STORY TO DO IT!!!!!! I liked this! Not many people make a pregnant Gaara! I just started my own fic yesterday with a pregnant Gaara!!! But Narutos' the father and he (or Gaara for that matter) doesn't know that his mates' pregnant!XDDDD Oh~! DRAMA!!!
And I hope Neji comes around and figure out what the hell happened! I'm an eye witness sweetie! I seen/taped/read/sold copies of the WHOLE THING!!!XDDD!
person name
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
tthe complex pair makies it more fun to write and also im happy you didnt write a Lee X garaa fanfic i dont know wtf is with these writers pair up those two from like epidsodes thats cant leading to them even liking eachother and plus garaa is bombshell getting pariedup with all the wrong people i personally think thats neji and garra are the most well fitted couple and your dong a great job at it so please finish it to the end unlike those lazy writters out there
person sapphirexkat2
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWW! I thought the sand turning into a cradle(sp? ^_^;;;) was cute. Shukaku is freakin' hilarious. Neji is freakin tall compared to Gaara! sheesh 5'4'' to 5'11'' heehee. Well Neji's tall standing up and lying down. bwahahahahah!!!!! bet Gaara's happy ^_^
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awww a cradle! it's a real shame they both understood something different with the 'i didn't mean' and stuff... UPDATE!!!
person cibiboy
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it but plez also add a lil nar and sas too