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for The New Family

by crowincarnate

person Rai
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it's good, totaly can't wait for more
person james
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey wouldent it be funny if naruto got pre 2 by sas then we can have 2 demon vassles having mode swings and morning sickness lol well update soon
person Trekiael
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AAhhh! Yes! NejiGaara is my second fav' pairing, and it's kinda a rare one, lots of people prefer Gaara with Lee (ewwww! Gaara is hot! Lee is ugly! Even if he's kind).

But I was afraid before reading this that you would put Sasuke and Naruto with other characters as SasuNaru is my fav' pairing, and even if we don't see a lot of them, knowing that they're together was an obligation for me to continue reading.

The fact the Gaara might be pregnant was an idea that came to my mind some time ago, cause, after all, if Naruto can because of Kyuu, why Gaara couldn't?

I personally hate NejiHina (in fact I don't really like Hinata at all), so it make their situation more unnerving for me.
My third fav' pairing is ShinoKiba, but I think KibaHina it's ok, I'm kinda used to it.

Gaara is pregnant, really, that's funny. Seriously, even if Naruto is not a very responsible person, he has the personallity for it, but Gaara? Gaara with cravings? Mood swings? Mouahahaha! Erm, I know your story is an angsty one, but we can still find some kind of humor in it.

Neji is a bastard, usually it's Sasuke who take the part the best (Sasuke: Hey! Me: What, that's true!) but he was pretty funny when drunk (mouahahaha, Neji drunk! Didn't he try to cut his hair for getting on his nerves whil drunk???) he really is a genius if he can fuck so well while being so smashed (and Gaara is an idiot for letting him, porr Gaa-chan! I love you).

What? You're still here reading? Don't you have better things to do like, I dunno, write the next chapter!
Good luck! Ja ne!
person MarinMelan90
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ain't the story grand? I like it! ;D I should since I proofread it! lol
person Kyuubi queen
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHH!!!! This is great write more please. This is great the beginning had me hooked the second i started reading.
person Exie
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story please continue! your a wunderful writer.
person vivacious
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
tender yet very amusing. finally gaara gets some love. i can't wait for the next chapter. please update soon.