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March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! Nicely done! I'm loving it! Can't wait to find out what happens next! If it's not too much trouble, do you think you could email me when you update? It would be much appreciated. anyway, UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!
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January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*sniffs through tears* What the shmullock?! I'm so confused TT_TT!! *blows nose* Ah, this story really... I hate Orochimaru with a passion. Damn it, I'm so pissed at Sasuke *kicks chair*.
Are you going to update...?
Are you going to update...?
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January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God,this is amazing..really,i love sasunaru and this yaoi fic is simply amazing,PLEASEEEEEEEEE UPDATE SOON,i can't wait.
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December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Are you going to update? This is my favorite Sasuke/Naruto fic so I hope you do... Just don't abandon it, please? I love it.
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June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please, I don't normally beg for authors to continue their stories but this one is....different. There is all the feelings and reality to it. I can't even find words for it. Please update soon and if you're not going to update could you tell me please?
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February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update! Update! Update!
I felt like I was warped into the text. <3 Which is kinda weird, because now my eyes feel really dry.
Thanks a lot, your good fic made my eyes dry. >_> *Shove.*
I felt like I was warped into the text. <3 Which is kinda weird, because now my eyes feel really dry.
Thanks a lot, your good fic made my eyes dry. >_> *Shove.*
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February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ah, i can't wait for the next chapter - you certaintly made this first one interesting.
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February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
so intense, so full of angst, so deliciously painful yet written with delicacy. i will enjoy seeing where these delightfully long chapters will head, lol
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February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yo. So, reading your footnote, I was extremely surprised; I totally did not realize that English is not your mother tongue. You write excellently, with beautifully aching poignancy, and have an obvious talent for setting the mood. It goes without being said that I find your characterizations wonderful. The part that broke my heart - more than the rest of the fic, at least - was when Orochimaru conveyed Sasuke's last message to Naruto. That was sheer brilliance. I look forward to more of this story - Sakura's single-minded dedication to bringing Sasuke back was very touching and painful, as was Naruto's resigned, hopeless point of view.
As for grammar, I really only have one suggestion: often, you use an apostrophe and an 's' to represent "was", which is fairly confusing and seems to disturb the flow of your tense. Since "'s" is usually used to represent "is", I recommend that you write out "was" instead of abbreviating it. Otherwise, excellent job! Well-written and captivating. =)
**Wolf**
As for grammar, I really only have one suggestion: often, you use an apostrophe and an 's' to represent "was", which is fairly confusing and seems to disturb the flow of your tense. Since "'s" is usually used to represent "is", I recommend that you write out "was" instead of abbreviating it. Otherwise, excellent job! Well-written and captivating. =)
**Wolf**
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February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is amazing! I can't come up with anything better to say, so