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June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It is a nice start. It will be interesting to see the development. Also I wonder who the teammates parents are.
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November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
DAMN IT YOU'D BETTER CONTINUE THIS!!! I WILL BE DEEPLY DISAPPOINTED IF YOU DON'T!!! when you update, which you'd better, i request you email me. my email address is deannathx@comcast.net
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May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great start! I really hope you continue this. ^_^
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February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great start. the plot line is rich and the characters are well developed. the way you tell this story draws the reader to live out the story, rather then just skiming through the lines. i can't wait for you to continue this story! happy writing!
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February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this was a killer first chapter. Long too. It was well written. I hope to be reading more soon.