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April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderfully poetic and depressing. I loved it really!~ thank you for writting it i love all your stories.
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January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked this. I like your style, and not just because you write my favorite Naruto pairing. You have a lot for me to go through, and I'm happy, beause you write well, and pay attention to details. You don't rush through important things, like feelings. Yes, I like you. As a writer, you make me very happy. ^_^ Keep up the excellent work!
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January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice story!!!
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July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I really enjoyed that, alot! ure a great writer!
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June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was so good. you should make it into a story it would be really awesome. hope you continue this story. see ya
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May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i kinda hate to say it (for reasons i can't say) but that poem relates WAY to much to me. i wrote a poem yesterday because i was depressed (for reasons i won't say). i wrote alot of poems but i think this one is the one that i should show and if you want to know the other ones just email me and i'll send them. so here's my poem:
Unmasked
Images so vivid in my mind
Turning back the hands of time
The pain and suffering that they bring
Goes unnoticed by everyone around me
Who knew such simple things could be the cause of this
To trigger all the pain and sorrow
I’ve held through out the years
The tears that will not fall
The smile that deceives them all
How can I go on living
When all I lived for slipped between my grasp
The only thing that I await
Is the death that will not come
Now that your at poems end
Put this within your head
Is my life really so swell
Does my mask work that well
That no one close to me can even tell
(Only you can answer that)
well, thats all i can say for now and umm....well if you...nm. ur poem was nice and i love the ending because he finds what hes been wanting. (i still haven't though) if you write another one like this please let me be the first to know. thanks. l8r!
o and just in case; the line Unmasked is the title. the poem starts at the line beginning with the word images
Unmasked
Images so vivid in my mind
Turning back the hands of time
The pain and suffering that they bring
Goes unnoticed by everyone around me
Who knew such simple things could be the cause of this
To trigger all the pain and sorrow
I’ve held through out the years
The tears that will not fall
The smile that deceives them all
How can I go on living
When all I lived for slipped between my grasp
The only thing that I await
Is the death that will not come
Now that your at poems end
Put this within your head
Is my life really so swell
Does my mask work that well
That no one close to me can even tell
(Only you can answer that)
well, thats all i can say for now and umm....well if you...nm. ur poem was nice and i love the ending because he finds what hes been wanting. (i still haven't though) if you write another one like this please let me be the first to know. thanks. l8r!
o and just in case; the line Unmasked is the title. the poem starts at the line beginning with the word images
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March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Haaaaaaa!!!!!!! *points finger at you* It's YOU!!! AGAIN!!! WHY IS IT THAT I ALWAYS FIND MYSELF IN THE CLUTCHES OF YOUR AWESOME STORIES?!?!?! THE PWNAGE!! THE PWNAGE!!!!!
*jumps off building*
*whispers, "don't worry, i liked it much... *nod**nod* i always like your stories. teeheehee."*
*jumps off building*
*whispers, "don't worry, i liked it much... *nod**nod* i always like your stories. teeheehee."*
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December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is very good. Nice job. I do wonder though if Itachi ends up also being Naruto's death too. Poor Naruto gets to live only a short time in the sun- like a butterfly?
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December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, this is a good one shot. I like it n.n
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September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it took me a while but I knew I had read this before...its still a GREAT story:D