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Okay, breaks over. Get those creative juices going. We want more. Don't make me harass you again.

Ok, so someone and I were just chatting about this story, and I'd read it forever ago and don't know why I didn't leave a review, so now I am. Are ya gonna update soon? I flippin' like this story a lot, so don't think we have forgotten about it!

This is really exciting!!! I hope you could update this faster than the usual. I love the intensity you put with each word. I hope to see more of this.

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gahhhh neeeeeed moooooorrrreeeee and i don't even know really if you're heading for sai x naru or sasuke x naru but i really don't care i love the whole thing so far... actually i was leaning towards sai (though i still feel sad for sasuke, especially when naruto was realizing sasuke's kiss really MEANT something) until that last scene with sex meaning power over naruto to sai... please do continue soon! i have to know what happens next!!

you know you could just amke the chapters shorter and update sooner to keep the peeps happy. speaking of which:

omg! whats gonna happen to naruto! nooo!

...that was sexy!

You have excellent insight into these characters. They're portrayed so well, even though I'm not a fan of Naruto/Sai I really enjoy this story. I can't wait to see where this goes.

I have to say, your writing is incredible. To some extent, it has actually made me like SaixNaruto - which was something I was against when Sai was first introduced to the manga. Please keep up the story. It's amazing.

And you rock.

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Wow. That was just..amazing. I love it! <3 Argh. I can't even say anything constructive right now..just...need. More.

Wow, I really loved this chapter. I read the original two on LJ when you posted them there. There are so many feelings involved in the relationship and how difficult it is for Naruto not to feel guilty about everything. I feel like he takes too much responsability for what everyone feels in this situation. It isn't really his fault that Sasuke has realized what he has lost now that Naruto is with Sai and he won't take no for an answer. I almost think that he knows how to push Naruto's guilt buttons (like he knows how to push the others).

I rather like how you characterized Sai. I think being with someone must be difficult and confusing for him, to show feelings, to have them. The last part of the fic emphasizes a lot of his way of thinking, how the shinobi comes through even during an intimate moment that borders in a nonconsensual act. He is going to overpower and take what is his and keep the enemy (Sasuke) at bay. I almost feel like this is for Sasuke's benefit as much as it is for Naruto. A show of posession and that he is not ready to give up on Naruto yet. I was wondering if Sasuke heard Naruto's shout as he said no? I can imagine how pissed he would be at Sai but also wishing it would be him that takes Naruto by force (his thoughts in the kitchen in the past chapter makes me think that way).

Dude, too much babbling, sorry! I love this fic and when you have gotten your strength back from writing this chapter, you can give us more. I am really looking forward to it.