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May 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! I've never read this pairing before but I'm already addicted!! Great job, your writing is very flowing.
can't wait till the next chapter (wink!) Update soon!
can't wait till the next chapter (wink!) Update soon!
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April 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Geez, I keep picking fics that get JUST to the point of lemony goodness and then they stop! >.< This fic is really fantastic though! Shika is perfect and I think totally in character. Shika is so apathetic he's hard to write, without making him seem depressed. You've done an excellent job and I'm totally looking forward to reading more. Yeah! :)
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April 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
If you dont write a 4th chapter I'm going to hunt you down and make you write it like in that one movie lol. Seriously though you're a fantastic writer I love it a lot I actually was reading it like I was reading a book which is rare when I read fan fics but you have talent. Thank god someone does ^_^ lol Plz write another chapter soon
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April 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was absolutely greart.
so it's gonna be KibaShika? I really don't care which couple it ends up with because really, with shika and naruto I like all of them. only ask them yaou (and uke!Naruto XDXDXD) I would love ShinoShika as well if I can help.
anyway, poor shika-kun, he really has a bad day today. sigh *snickers* anyway, the chapter was just plainly wonderful and I hopeyou will post another soon! ^^ you made me happy because I was thinking about your fic before entering in AFF.net and wondering whether or not you would update... and I had a chapter! ^^
thanks!
Ceph
PS= I think the plot is freaking interesting. I also hope we'll have a little bit more of SasuNaru (though my real fav is ItaNaru... XD)
so it's gonna be KibaShika? I really don't care which couple it ends up with because really, with shika and naruto I like all of them. only ask them yaou (and uke!Naruto XDXDXD) I would love ShinoShika as well if I can help.
anyway, poor shika-kun, he really has a bad day today. sigh *snickers* anyway, the chapter was just plainly wonderful and I hopeyou will post another soon! ^^ you made me happy because I was thinking about your fic before entering in AFF.net and wondering whether or not you would update... and I had a chapter! ^^
thanks!
Ceph
PS= I think the plot is freaking interesting. I also hope we'll have a little bit more of SasuNaru (though my real fav is ItaNaru... XD)
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April 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOOHHH!!! Shika and Kiba... yummy!! ^^ And poor Shika! He's just getting the shit kicked out of him. lol
Very nice chapter. I love the kissing, oooooh gave me chills with the description. ^^ Keep it up!
me
Very nice chapter. I love the kissing, oooooh gave me chills with the description. ^^ Keep it up!
me
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April 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMFG this was so awesome. so IC.
I loved it to pieces... even with the strange hints at pairings. XDXDXD lovelovelove.
who's gonna end up with? Neji? *hopes* though my fav is sadly enough ShikaNaru ;_;
anyway, please continue, you had Shika so IC I was drooling and laughing and was so contented to have started reading it I would love to hug you and thank you! ^^
CEPH
I loved it to pieces... even with the strange hints at pairings. XDXDXD lovelovelove.
who's gonna end up with? Neji? *hopes* though my fav is sadly enough ShikaNaru ;_;
anyway, please continue, you had Shika so IC I was drooling and laughing and was so contented to have started reading it I would love to hug you and thank you! ^^
CEPH
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April 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey!
Hehe, very amusing. I have a very strong feeling it will be Neji and Shika, though I'm not betting any money.
Your representation of Lee was priceless. Every time Lee talked, I would crack up. My boyfriend and roommate both look at me like I'm on crack.
Good beginning and good set up with Shika's character (your style). I gotta say, Shika with his fuck buddy, that was hot. DAMN! @.@ Was it an actual character or was it an OC?
I'm looking forward to the next one. I've noticed that people don't really read about characters other than the typical SasuNaru pair. Don't let that get you down. There are the rare few of us who venture out into the great unknown... ^^
Take care!
Hehe, very amusing. I have a very strong feeling it will be Neji and Shika, though I'm not betting any money.
Your representation of Lee was priceless. Every time Lee talked, I would crack up. My boyfriend and roommate both look at me like I'm on crack.
Good beginning and good set up with Shika's character (your style). I gotta say, Shika with his fuck buddy, that was hot. DAMN! @.@ Was it an actual character or was it an OC?
I'm looking forward to the next one. I've noticed that people don't really read about characters other than the typical SasuNaru pair. Don't let that get you down. There are the rare few of us who venture out into the great unknown... ^^
Take care!