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April 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY, I got to read more of this... I was like really annoyed when I first read the first chapters and then Aff had their 'downtime' and then the 'move' occurred... Anyways, I really love your story, even though I usually don't like fanfictions where Naru-chan's stroger than Sasuke.. :/
Lovely plot (this far) and great sex *giggles* Keep up the good work ^_~
Update Soon, ne?
Ja~
Lovely plot (this far) and great sex *giggles* Keep up the good work ^_~
Update Soon, ne?
Ja~
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April 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohh come on why do u have to let it end there ... man...... I hope u update soon pls pls pls pls update soon
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April 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i think this one of the best fics i've ever read by why did u stop where u did u got me all excited then stopped right when the juicy stuff was happening man that just ain't right lol but seriously i really and hope you update soon please please see you got me beggin like a kid lol :-) ja
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April 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this story rox plz update i LOOOOOVE IT.
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April 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is great I love it and I hope to read more ^_^
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April 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my!! I really like this story! It was a little slow-moving at first (or maybe I'm just too used to reading action-packed fanfics...) but overall it's very well-written. As much as others might disagree, one of the things that I like about this story is that there isn't so much yaoiness that it's completely unrealistic. Don't get me wrong, I'm a total yaoi lover, but when a simple 'I love you' suddenly turns into hot sex, it's a bit unbelievable. The way that you've written your story (although I don't normally like 'smarter but hidden from everyone' fanfics) is very believable and kept me continuing through the chapters. Update soon!!
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April 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sweet story! and Sasuke just kissed him GREAT! Can't wait for Naruto's answer, Plez update soon!
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April 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really like this story...i LOVE it when people write stories about naruto being really intelligent but just hiding it from his team. i think in teh cartoon he is alot smarter then people give him credit for. plus SASU/NARU just makes it that much better. i can't wait to read what is going to happen next...GOOD LUCK!!!
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April 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omg,
I have an 8 o'clock class in the morning, and here I am, almost 3 AM reading your story. BAH!!
Needless to say, I like it a lot. I like the Naruto you're developing and Kyuubi. Damn, she's hot.
Keep it up! ^^ I was very happy when I started reading thinking I would only read 2 chapters, but then more chapters were added while I was reading.
Take care!
I have an 8 o'clock class in the morning, and here I am, almost 3 AM reading your story. BAH!!
Needless to say, I like it a lot. I like the Naruto you're developing and Kyuubi. Damn, she's hot.
Keep it up! ^^ I was very happy when I started reading thinking I would only read 2 chapters, but then more chapters were added while I was reading.
Take care!
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April 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great update! It was so funny how everyone is shoked silly in this chapter! can't wait to read more, so please update soon!!!