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for Everybody Loves Sasuke

by The2Evils

schedule May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omfg that was aweomse!
does this mean it's haku's turn to have fun with sasuke?
schedule December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I had almost thought you had forgotten about this story! I'm glad you're continuing 'cause it's one of my fave SasUKE stories and it's sad that there are so few. Overall, I thought chapter 8 was hilarious! Especially the Lee part and at the end when Haku threw the needles in Sasuke's neck and he went limp like a doll. Does he just have no control over his limbs at the moment or is he unconscious?
schedule December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you know.. there really should be more stories like this. MUAH!!!! love you for writing this. :D
person charmpit
schedule December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke getting pounded by Kakashi was good. Sasuke getting pounded by Naruto/Kyuubi, then Lee, then ZABUZA for corn's sake--that was nothing short of brilliance. I am applauding.

Who gets that ass next? I can't wait to find out!
person Shiauko
schedule December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mmm. Delicious. It made me wish I could rape him too. But I ain't a guy. *Crys* I wish I was a boy so I could rape people. Like SasUKE. Nehehehe. Quite odd really, I had just told a friend of mine about the whole uke in Sasuke thing. Maybe a week or so ago.
person oohshiny
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg me LUVZ dis sotry, email me when you update? ^^
person oohshiny
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
DAMMIT my emails hidden. its deannathx@comcast.net
person Anon
schedule March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HI GIRLS!!! THE STORY REALLY SEEMS TO BE COMING TOGETHER BUT YOU'RE NOT UPDATING QUICK ENOUGH!!! BIANCA DEAR YOU KEEP GETTING BETTER!!! FINALLY CONGRATULATIONS TO MONA I CAN ONLY GUESS HOW HARD IT WAS FOR YOU TO WRITE ABOUT LEE BUT YOU DID IT!!!


D&L
schedule January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*squeals* you updated1 *throws brownies around like confetti*
please update soon *pleads with fresh baked brownies*
person Shadow
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I love this. Everythings so ... ubrupt. It's like, oh hi there Sasuke! We're going to fuck now and then I'm gunna get going okay? Like this happens everyday and there's nothing at all out of the ordinary with it.

Only nit pick I have is that the smut part is really basic in writing. (Though still really smexy). It's a lot of "x does y to w's z" kind of thing. Try using some fancy language or metaphores or something. Other than that, keep up the good work! <3