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When i saw there was a new chapter up of this story i almost wept with joy. This was actually the first story i read on this site, yes i know i haven't bneen coming here that long but i checked every day waiting. This story is so well written and it has seriously gotten to me time after time. I just really hope the next chapters don't take that long. Cause i just can't wait to see what happens next.

Hey Legilmyth how ya been hit me up and I would like to talk to you some more too. If your not too busy that is talk to you soon. I like the update it is pretty good hope to read more from you

Well that was a good chapter about time and I cann`t wait till you update again that I wouldn`t doubt be somewhere maybe spring or summer of 2008 I would be surprize if it was updated sooner that or his other story Return to Sound that I doubt would be updated oh well atleast this story was finally updated

OMG You UPDATED! I can't tell you how long I've waited for this, prayed for this, and continued to check on this fic. It's one of my all time favorites and I'm glad that you haven't forgotten about it.

its a great story but ive been wait awhile for the next couple of chapters to come up

I love this story so much, i have sat here on this boring day and read it all...in one day >.> lolz. i am a little strange.

I spent three hours today reading your story, and i abbsolutley love it. It's nice and refreshing to ahve a normal story, and not just a raunchy sex-infested story on here. Also, i can't fine this story on ff.net, but i'll jsut look up your name. I'm starting to grow impatient aboutt hwne they are finally going to realize their feelings towards each other. And i also can't wait to see what exactly is going on inside of Temari.

Can't wait for 22!!!

This is now one of my favourite Naruto fanfics around. Please do update soon.

I found your story at about chapter 11 and have followed it nearly religiously. your characters are well built, taking the character traits from the manga/anime and maturing them to fit the characters age, while adding depth that wasn't really possible in the anime/manga. Your story is very well written and ranks up there with several of my other favorites which include: The Code by CasaHouse, Of Ballet and Bullets By Serenanna, and Reading Totems by GrizzlyTeddyBear. keep up the good work because there are damn few Canadian writers of your calibre on AFFnet.

Chaos is the fire that tempers the soul.
Auric

hey, this fic = my heart. :D

You rock socks :P


Omg ur awesome.

Update update update.

Temari+Naruto=The SEXIEST EVER!


I <3 U 4 this fic.


peace