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August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just read the latest chapter and boy is it good. 10000000000 stars for you and I hope that you update soon.
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August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
update soon plz. i really enjoy this story... i've been reading it for a long time and i can't wait for an update. thanks
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July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story, I also really like the pairing. Look forward to seeing more.
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July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really great story. I couldn't stop reading. I'm generally biased to the HinataXNaruto pairing but this story really made be like TemariXNaruto. Please update soon!
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July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely one of the best stories I have ever had the good fortune of reading. This story has me hanging on the edge of my seat with anticipation for the next chapter, and I'm actually worried that something bad might happen to either Naruto or Temari. Not a couple one would expect, but you make it work very well. The ANBU with the deer mask has me a little warry though. Is he one of Temari's attckers, and is it possible that he wants to help start a war? Guess I'll have to wait for the next update. Check out my profile here if you want to e-mail me, my yahoo adress is there. Keep up the good work!
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July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very, very, very interesting... I just love how you are piecing this together.... abeit I at first didn't like the way you had them meet up again...
I find it funny that Tsunade is completely out of the loop when it comes to knowing what's going on in the village.
I hope to see this continue. It's a sad story, but I find it very interesting...
I find it funny that Tsunade is completely out of the loop when it comes to knowing what's going on in the village.
I hope to see this continue. It's a sad story, but I find it very interesting...
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June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...I don't know why...but I felt strangely unsatated with this chapter. I don't know why, and no, I'm not saying that this was a bad chapter, I'm just saying that I need MORE!!
-Damp *The fic I REALLY want to read is 'Return to Sound' it was getting good! So can you please update that one???!!! PLEASE!!*
-Damp *The fic I REALLY want to read is 'Return to Sound' it was getting good! So can you please update that one???!!! PLEASE!!*
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June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am really loving the story so far and I hope that Naruto-kun finds out who did this and tells Garra so that they both can kick their evil butts. I also love the fact that Kyuubi is trying to help hook up Temari and Naruto. Good job and I hope that you continue this tory.
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June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This I is one for the books. I want to thank you for such a well writen fan fiction and to say sorry that this is the first time I have writen a revew for this story. I just could not figure out how but now I've got it down and I plan to revew with each chapter.
Ps.
Know the Rand ^_^
Fear the Rand O_O
Feal the Rand ^_- .....Feal the Rand again O_o'
Ps.
Know the Rand ^_^
Fear the Rand O_O
Feal the Rand ^_- .....Feal the Rand again O_o'
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June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good... I review this in an ealier chapter but I forgot what name I used... Prolly Paladin or Caterham... or se7en...
Either way I like the story you have going here. It is easy to read... as in a pile of sexual content isn't slapped roughly in every corner. Now if I could only find a way to get rid of those freakish banners I could read without worry of my roommates busting in. XD
Either way I like the story you have going here. It is easy to read... as in a pile of sexual content isn't slapped roughly in every corner. Now if I could only find a way to get rid of those freakish banners I could read without worry of my roommates busting in. XD