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COME ON AND UPDATE THE STORY PLEASE what are you planning to do update every other month heck add me to your list to let us know whenever you decide to actually update both stories

This is one of the most impressive depictions of emotion I have ever read. It rivals "Tales from
the House of the Moon" (A story everyone should read). In my humble (ha ha) opinion this is the
highest praise I can heap upon your already massive list of laudable compliments. That being said
please continue this story, and just as importantly let me know when it is updated, I wouldn't
miss this for the world...OK for the world I might, but not for a weekend without homework.

Whoops, there was one thing though...I'm glad that Naruto-kun stopped calling Temari "babe".
It somehow didn't seem right especialy in light of what happened to her. For that matter what
is with this "White Chakara" stuff anyway, or Kyuubi leaving Temari with Shukaku and Gaara? Huh?
Anyhoo, there was only one thing that got to me...things like "Uchiha, Sasuke" because...and
I will try to cut this short...because of some quirk in Japanease writing, which as a westerner
I don't understand the logic of, they have the family name come before the personal name i.e.
"Uchiha Sasuke". There were a few other things but the story on a whole was worth reading too
much to complain more than this in one night.

Good luck and keep up the great work,
Fenris al Ookami

It pains me to see such good stories without a proper ending... when are you going to update it? I am eagerly awaiting the exciting fanalie. Anyway if I may make a few suggestions. I would love to see Naruto and Kyuubi finally come to terms and Naruto undoing the spell he cast so they can talk again. Also some Shukaku/Kyuubi conversations, I assume that they can talk telapathicly. As for the rest I leave it in your capable hands. SWEET story... it just needs a proper ending.

Tleilaxu

this is an awsome fic, its so detailed. its the first naruto/temeri fic I've read and I can now say I like the pairing, hopefuly I can see what comes of this fic when you update. much luck! ja ne!

I was happy that you finally updated but when are ou going to update again yet another 2 months i`m sorry for rushing you bt theseare good stories that I can`t wait to read more of but I can`t until you decide if your going to update of not so PLEASE UPDATE BOTH OF YOUR STORIES

I LOVE THIS NEW CHAPTER!!! It was great!!! And i know that there cant be a lemon with them but maybe some more fluff? like one of them can realise their feelings for the other and kiss them? Maybe Naruto being gone will show them both that they love each other and when he comes back they kiss and tell their feelings and she asks again about the godfather thing and then the brothers get there and YEAH happyness!!! I stayed up till 1 in the morning reading this cause i couldn't stop and i'm so hyper now that all that just kinda came out. Cant wait for more!! And maybe my little out burst helped....idk but i cant WAIT for the next chapter!!! look forward to it so much!!! <3

I must say I truely do love your writing. The empathasis on plot is wonderful and make this story extremely worthwhile to read.

Keep up the good work and keep on writing! 10/10 for this chapter.

great story very realistic.
Cant wait to see what happens