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for After the pain

by Legilmyth

person The Great Kakashi
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Man this is one of the most unbelievably awesome fics I have ever read! It's just soo friggin awesome! I don't want to see Gaara come and take Temari back, she should stay in Konoha with Naruto! And they should kiss really soon! I thought there was definitly going to be a kiss between them when he put his fingers on her chin to make her look up at him! It would of been a perfect time to kiss her!!! Anyways, sweet fanfic. Keep up the awesome work!

~GTK
person The Great Kakashi
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
~TGK ^^^
person Ian
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is that this has been a great story so far. I wonder what is going to happen with Tanuki and Garra. It seems as though his taste for blood is still raging. Anywhos you get 10/10 for such a good fic. I was a bit sad that Ino lost Shikamaru but such is the way of the ninja, ne? Great job and I hope to see more from you in the future. Ja ne.
person Anon
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love this story. great chapter.
person nonengel
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
its great to see a new chapter to this, i'm glad to see the message finally made it into the sand.

i enjoyed the laid back feel that a good portion of this chapter had, naruto's "role" in the village continues to interest me
person Gavin McBaine
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
God I love this story; and the new chapter only confirms my feelings. I hate to sound like a die hard fan, even though i am one, but PLEASE PUT UP MORE!!! I DREAM OF THE NEXT CHAPTER AND MUST READ IT OR I WON"T GET A GOOD NIGHTS SLEEP!!!
as always much love and hope everything is goign well.

Gavin McBaine AKA STillnotwalking
person Kilrath
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another excelent chapter. Also on a cool note for you, your story, after the pain, is in first in the polls currentally by 4%. Keep up the good work
person Wolfie
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story.I also love your other ones too.xD Thanks for showing me what there is to love about Inuyasha.
person kyubiteaser
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
boy now THAT was a teaser! At least it had Gaara (finally) LOL

Now in the next chapter Temari jumps Naruto right? *winkwinknudgenudge*

Keep up the good work, and good luck on the NFA's! One more month to go!

~Teaser
person Peacemaker of the Phoenix Soul
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay, another wonderful chapter and the messenger finally was able to deliver the really important letter hehe. Keep up the great work and update when you have time please.