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great chapter, i loved the training with iruka. He's always been a character that i had wished to see further developed in the managa. Seeing as thats not happening its good to see skilled fan authors doing it themselves

UPDATE SOON

yay! so happy theres another chapter! this is one of the few fics I always look forward to being updated!

and I know I say this every update but....

DAMNIT WHERE'S GAARA!?!?! *lol*

It's not nice to tease the teaser! *gryns*

~Teaser

Wow. It's amazing. At first I refused to read this because I hate the idea of a Naruto/Temari pairing yet the way you write makes it seem extremely good. The only problem I have is the fact that you have a lot of typos and sentences are grammarically wrong at points. And yes, it's kinda weird having Temari keep the baby or even having one in the first place. Imagine if it was Zetsu's child or something. THAT'D be weird >.>

Nellysan,
Bahamut916@hotmail.com

Its very well thoought out and very interesting, im hoping that in the next chapter you'll bring Gaara back into the story.
keep up the great work on this and ur other stories i love to read them

sweet

Hey Justsaying hiand hope your doing good.Love the update andI might have to read afewof the chapters againhope you e-mail me lateron and we can talk some more if you want...JTB8834@aol.com... Keep up the great writings and hope to see more of your story soon...

you have every right to be upset and i dont think u are over reacting at all. i wont pretend to have any idea how hard u worked on ATP but i believe u worked your ass off. it is one of my favorite fics and i will miss the updates until this mess gets straightened out. do what you gotta do.

sincerely,
Davie

O.O WHO WOULD DO SUCH A THING!!! if i were u i would track the person and MAKE THEM PAY!!! i would say i was a fan (hide ur identity) of this guy and and then once u have gained their trust (as the saying goes "keep ur friends close but keep ur enemy's closer) THEN STAB IN THE BACK (not being literal but i hope u know wat i mean) CUZ THAT'S JUST WRONG!!! and i hope u know that once i found out that some one was ripping u off (i have been with this story since day one) I KNOW HOW U FELT!!! all that work and then some guy/girl just comes sneaking off and STEALING IT'S WORTH!!! MAN I HOPE THEY DIE OF GUILT!!! or at least feel bad enough to say it to EVERYONE who had been deceived by him/her that THE WORK THEY WERE MAKING WAS NOT THEIRS!!! *sob* and that this person is KILLING me cuz i SO DESPERATLY WANT TO FINISH THIS!!! (i am an avid reader for this one) *tears* *gives u a hug* hope u beat the shit out of this guy/girl AND THAT U RN'T THE ONLY ONE SUFFERING!!! we ,ur fans for this story, R SUFFERING TOO!

this message is mainly for the person stealing this story. I AM A HACKER. I WILL FIND YOU IF THIS DOESN'T STOP. I WILL TAKE ALL OF YOUR PERSONNEL INFORMATION AND USE IT TO MAKE YOU POOR AS DIRT. YOU RUINED THIS FOR ME AFTER I HAD FINALLY FOUND A STORY I LIKE. AND I WILL FIND YOU. SO I WOULD STOP WHAT YOUR DOING AND SEND AN APOLOGY TO Legilmyth SO WE CAN ALL FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT.