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for After the pain

by Legilmyth

person ms.tuesday
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG THAT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOOOOD KEEEP UP THE GOOD WORK IM READING THIS AGAIN!
person Slade
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hmm.....amazing...i really liked it..keep it up..i like where things are going....and their relationship is going at a good pace to...usually people movem way to fast......good work
person yugioh fangirl2232
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awww how cute awesomeness you rule keep it up
person max suptual
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
eh.i dudn't like this story to much.....but tuesday yelled at me till i agreed to re read it and ya know its not that bad i really like your most recent chapter eh....nice work.
person slain lord baki
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
EEEEEEP INO!!!!!! lol that was cooltastic to the max! omg i love you! UPDATE!!!
person sailor mercury
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i liked this chapter the most out of them all so far...good work
person sonic sonar
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
eh...i dunno...im not to in to the story i like it just not my thing...tuesday wont leave me alone tho till i write a positive review......god shes scary.......anyway....good work i guess...im going back to sleep.
person Canthinkofaname
schedule September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, i still love this fic. Its completely awesome and is still my favorite
person Pickle
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I feel like a girl for saying this, but HORRAY FOR FLUFF!! I loved that chapter and can't wait for the next! yay super-fluff! .. and it was done tastefully too, which I appreciate ^_^

- Pickle (don't ask, I don't know why..)
person Reemu-Chan (not signed in)
schedule September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG. I am sooooooooooooo sorry for the tortorously long time for me to read this. I didn't know that you had updated until I started searching for the story. I'm glad that your trip went well and I am so pleased with this chapter. It's wonderfully incredible I tell ya. And I enjoyued the cuddliness. =^-^=

Man, it's true, ain't it? It's always the hot guys that are gay. So does Kakashi have a thing for Iruka? I'm asking b/c that conversation about kids threw me off by a mile. At first I thought that it was Tsunade that he was after. And specially b/c of the flirting and the informal way he'd refer to her in. Can't wait to see what's really going on.

I love Sasuke, have I mentioned that? The way he's formed in your story makes me want to write about how life would be like for him to have kids and all his life goals accomplished. But still, it's depressing to know that he was clueless of his best friends' relationship with Jewel.

The fluff was sweet. I hope there's more in the next chapter. I'm dying for Naruto to just kiss her on the lips. It'd be so ........zomg kawaii ^^

I had to hold back tears when I discovered Shikamaru had died long ago. That is so depressing. How could you do that to me, babe? Do you not know that I'm a fragile human being. Poor Ino. So who's she hooked up with? Chouji? I think that they'd make a fabulous pair.

I have been pondering for the longest time where the heck Sakura was at. Finally. She's hooked up with our beloved Lee and has a baby. Adorable. And it is so like Lee to be a mother hen.


Speaking of Mother hen, I bet Iruka is happy to think that he's going to be a grandfather. How ironic too, that Temari is pregnant and eventually everyone will find out. Naruto will sure have some explaining to do. I mean, Sasuke isn't going to be stupid of the matter. OMG, SASUKE. I just remembered, They're going to be escorting the new messenger and they'll probably run across the new Akatsuki group. Or they'll probably discover Gaara and unbury him.

Damn. so much is happening and as much as I'd love to sit here and type everything out for you, I have a baby sister to watch over and I've got a full bladder to take care of ^^


Good luck with your next chapter,


~Ria ^.~