rate_review Reviews

I repeat you have a GIFT for story telling!! I am really enjoying this story, and thank you for; a. not immediatly throwing every character from the story into it as fast as possible, b. Being realistic, I mean these people are ninjas not everyone is going to survive that kind of lifestyle no matter how good the "rookie nine" are. Again great pacing,congrats on your nomination if you don't win you were robbed!! Peace!

Honestly i think this is one of the best stories that i have read so far on any site bar none. All I can really say after that is keep up the good work and keeep it coming.

P.S. When will the next chapter be out

Heh that ending deserves a big "Awww" from the audience! Another great chapter, keep up the good work!

Aww! So Kawaii! Yes, fluffy enough with interest. ^-^ I have to say I love this fanfic. It's unique to me, and very easy to read. There's no boring parts, and it's not all action. Yes yes, very good! I can't wait till the next one. =3

-Shadow

Wow that was so freekin good. I can't wait for ur next chapter.

Hey are u gonna explain how shika died or did u and i just forgot. well anyways

Jan ne
Because I Can

Another great chapter and it is really good to be reading a new chapter :) Keep up the great work and update when you have time please.

you quick authors comment prett ymuch summe dup how i feel aobut the majority of this chapter. fluffy, but honestly, not in a bad way. the pacing of this chapter worked well and its emotions came across nicely. I'm a little sad the shikamaru is dead (i honestly can't remember if that was brought up earlier) but the time spent with ino was enjoyable.

Yes, fluffy enough! Wow--a big long chapter, and so good! I love seeing Naruto happy! Loved the humorous touches too! There are two "and" that turned into "an" and "ad" but otherwise, excellent proofreading (I'm always catching a ton of stuff in mine no matter how many times I read it). I love your Tsunade, Iruka, and Kakashi! The bit about kids and Kakashi was great. I like the new role with Ino and learning more about the bad guys. But why are you so mean to Shika? Ok, he's dead, but did you have to make him a lousy kisser? Or, I guess he just wasn't that into Temari? (lol) I loved it!
Eagerly waiting for more, H.

huzahh, you updated. love the everything about this fic, keep the updates coming :D

I love this fic so much!!!!! I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter!