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September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter
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September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You Killed Shikamaru!!!! I did not see that coming...Yeah LEE-KUN! Good stuff...keep it going!
Its awesome how you were recommended for the fanfic awards thing...Im glad someone is acknowledging your talents!
Its awesome how you were recommended for the fanfic awards thing...Im glad someone is acknowledging your talents!
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September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey nice to see an update from you. I am glad you had the time to write your story. Hope to hear from you soon. Keep up the great work and talk to you soon. JTB8834@aol.com
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August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I felt like crying maaaaannnnnn but that was so good. Cant wait for more from such awesome work dude see ya qaround man but god damn NAruto will have a god child thng or watever you call it as liike a ya know well anyhow im out lata
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August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter! You did a great job of explaining Naruto's past right down to a pinpoint. Besides from a few spelling errors i see nothing wrond with this chapter. Hope you have a safe trip and update whenever you can, your fan will always ber here waiting for you. Also, i have to say despite how much i hate Jewel I hope they are still alive and she comes back with a change of heart. LoL that would be crazy, Jewel comes back and is madly in love with Naruto but Temari is too A LOVE TRIANGLE!!!! Once again thanks for the great chapter.
~Mugen~
~Mugen~
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August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was a very emotional chapter. it was well written and has a strong felling to it. please continue writing these chapters.
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August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!
Keep it up, I can't wait for the next one.
XD
Keep it up, I can't wait for the next one.
XD
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August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey sweetie ^^
I really have missed you. I wanted to send you a comment just to see how things were going and was surprised to see an update. I’m sorry I couldn’t have read it sooner. I’ve been quite busy. This chapter was so depressing. I don’t think that I’ve ever felt this kind of pain before. It was like having hope ripped away from your fragile fingers. And everything Jewel did made me want to hug Naruto. The guy is such a sweetheart. I had no idea that he had such a painful life. And then there was that occurrence with the Akatsuki going after Sasuke and his family. I think that it’s wonderful that Naruto is very protective of his best friend. It’s so adorable even because Sasuke has so many kids. So, is this why Naruto blocked the Kyuubi? Does he blame Kyuubi for Jewel’s disappearance? Does he feel that maybe the fox scared her away? It would somewhat explain his separation for the kitsune. Kyuubi….he really was just trying to help Naruto. He was aware of all that was going on. So he decided to save Temari’s baby so that Naruto may be able to get over that ordeal that happened so long ago. =^-^=
But to think……neither Sakura or Sasuke…….Neji or Konohamaru…..Hinata or Shino…..Kakashi or Jiraiya…..no one else knew? It must have been really hard to see his friends have a family. Speaking of Sakura, I haven’t heard anything from or about her. Did something happen or is she just busy working at the hospital?
So we now know what happened to the Konoha messenger. XD That was so hilarious. He’s been camping out the whole time because of the storm Gaara has been creating. I know it’s not a laughing matter, but the image of a messenger walking around a ball of wild sand and trying to find an opening while Kankurou and everyone in Suna are waiting to hear news of their beloved Kunoichi is so maddening.
I hope you have a wonderful and safe trip. Where exactly is it that you are going? I mean, school is starting up and everything. You can’t possibly be on vacation. ……..or can you O.o
Love you writing like always,
I’ll be looking forward to an update. Even If I’ll be busy with my studies I’ll try and stop by to give you a ‘hello’
~Ria ^.~
I really have missed you. I wanted to send you a comment just to see how things were going and was surprised to see an update. I’m sorry I couldn’t have read it sooner. I’ve been quite busy. This chapter was so depressing. I don’t think that I’ve ever felt this kind of pain before. It was like having hope ripped away from your fragile fingers. And everything Jewel did made me want to hug Naruto. The guy is such a sweetheart. I had no idea that he had such a painful life. And then there was that occurrence with the Akatsuki going after Sasuke and his family. I think that it’s wonderful that Naruto is very protective of his best friend. It’s so adorable even because Sasuke has so many kids. So, is this why Naruto blocked the Kyuubi? Does he blame Kyuubi for Jewel’s disappearance? Does he feel that maybe the fox scared her away? It would somewhat explain his separation for the kitsune. Kyuubi….he really was just trying to help Naruto. He was aware of all that was going on. So he decided to save Temari’s baby so that Naruto may be able to get over that ordeal that happened so long ago. =^-^=
But to think……neither Sakura or Sasuke…….Neji or Konohamaru…..Hinata or Shino…..Kakashi or Jiraiya…..no one else knew? It must have been really hard to see his friends have a family. Speaking of Sakura, I haven’t heard anything from or about her. Did something happen or is she just busy working at the hospital?
So we now know what happened to the Konoha messenger. XD That was so hilarious. He’s been camping out the whole time because of the storm Gaara has been creating. I know it’s not a laughing matter, but the image of a messenger walking around a ball of wild sand and trying to find an opening while Kankurou and everyone in Suna are waiting to hear news of their beloved Kunoichi is so maddening.
I hope you have a wonderful and safe trip. Where exactly is it that you are going? I mean, school is starting up and everything. You can’t possibly be on vacation. ……..or can you O.o
Love you writing like always,
I’ll be looking forward to an update. Even If I’ll be busy with my studies I’ll try and stop by to give you a ‘hello’
~Ria ^.~
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August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is still the best fic on AFF! Keep up the good work! Jewel is a bitch, though! If she wasn't carrying Narutos child..I might have killed her myself!