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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was curious as to how this chapter would go after the ending of the last.
Excellent.
This was perhaps that best chapter I've seen of this story. The background story you made regarding Naruto and Jewel was extraordinary. You had enough detail and emotion in it to warrant making it a story on its own.
I'm looking forward to seeing how the relationship between Naruto and Temari will proceed after this.
Excellent.
This was perhaps that best chapter I've seen of this story. The background story you made regarding Naruto and Jewel was extraordinary. You had enough detail and emotion in it to warrant making it a story on its own.
I'm looking forward to seeing how the relationship between Naruto and Temari will proceed after this.
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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How can you have such a great talent in writing a story this good. I can relate to Naruto. Why cuz of how he is treated and I lose sleep cuz of the story being as good as it is. I love the way it is turning out and who is Jewel. Can you fill me in on that and hope to see more from you.
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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh!!!!!!!! that was just. . . *grabs a tissue* that was an amazing new chapter i seriously cant wait for more
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July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful story!
Please continue it, I can't wait for more!
Please continue it, I can't wait for more!
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July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story cant wait on the next chappy
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July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sweet
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July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey Legilmyth great story. I had to re-read it cuz I got a bit lost cuz of certain chapters when they argue with themselves. I like this story so much I already read 11 chapters since Yesterday and today. By reading these stories that all of you put up kinda helps me get lost in the story and I don't sleep a lot during the night anyways so you can say I have insomnia during the night. I am glad that your a good writer and hope to see an update soon. Hope Kyubi and Naruto get to figure out what to do. I hope Temari and Naruto stay together. I have a question what was Garra say about letting Temari be were she belonged in the 2nd Chapter I believe. e-mail me to help me out with understanding a few things please
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July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It is an amzing story very well developed. I hope you make a sequel to it, probably couple years after maybe <_< >_>
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July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just love your fanfic. I've read all the chapters so far, and every one is great. There are misspellings here and there, but it's still a really good plot. Out of a 1-10 rating give this a 9. 1 subtracted for misspellings. That's ok though, cause I misspell A lot of things too. Lol ^-~ Please continue with this great work, I'm enjoying it a lot. And I think you're really good at this. I know I couldn't do all this. x-x
-Shadow
-Shadow
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July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You evil bitch, I hate you, I love you GAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!
I love where you are taking this, the character developement, the story as a whole, everything.
You have provided 15 chapters of one of the most original and most enjoyable fanfics I have read, period.
You have also kicked me in the pants with awesome twists, and I do so enjoy the pain.
Thank you for your story so far, and please update when you can.
This ends my weirdest/creepiest review.
I love where you are taking this, the character developement, the story as a whole, everything.
You have provided 15 chapters of one of the most original and most enjoyable fanfics I have read, period.
You have also kicked me in the pants with awesome twists, and I do so enjoy the pain.
Thank you for your story so far, and please update when you can.
This ends my weirdest/creepiest review.