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Finally, I've been waiting for you to post this chapter forever. Yeeah, Chapter 16 is next! I noticed some improvements from the first chapter 15, good job. I'm just checking in with this review to show you I still think about your story. Happy Writing!

Hey I read every chapter from like 6:00 til about 5:00 in the morning. I just can't sleep so I decided to let my mind go into a reading frenzy to read this story that u have wrote so good that I ca actually see Naruto as he is in ur story. But I never sought a few of ur couples and what happened to Sakura. Naruto cares for Terami but he doesn't go on his feelings. Y did he decide to lock up the Nine tailed fox as his demon part of him. Now I see he didn't want to be talked to by a demon all day and now that his demon got a crack to help Naruto some. What is going on with Kakashi and Iruka. R they going to be a couple that ur going to showcase later in the chapter. But Terami and Naruto is a great pairing that I didn't see but Grat story and e-mail at JTB8834@aol.com to let me know if u ever need help with a chap or to say u updated this great story

i have been waitin 4 ever for more of this fic i love after the pain n not to b mean i love all the angest that narutos goin rhrough casuase we all know in the end he'll get the happieness that he diserves. thank u thank u for makin this chappy so long it really makes up for the wait. please up date soon ^^

Gah...how could you end it right there. I hope you have a good lawyer, because you just commited murder by cliffhanger.

Well, this is really a nice fanfiction. I usually don't review, but this fiction is well written, has a definite and original plot, and also very important it's not rushed at all. This is very good because honestly many fictions have been ruined by hasty development. I am truly curious to know how you will contine it.

A small advice/request though. Could you move it to the heterosexual section? General is swamped by yaoi... and it's a real pain to search for the ficton amidst a mountain of yaoi c***.

Sincerely, Akras

Oh wow that was a long chapter, just the way I like em! The best way I can describe this chapter is like saying it’s a roller coaster. The hole scene with Tsunade and Kakashi really made me think this story was going to have a Tsunade/Kakashi paring but that hole scene with Iruka made me seriously rethink that. Is there anything more to Kakashi and Irukas relationship or am I the only one who thinks that? Well any way I got another question, what’s the deal with that ending

“Its all right, I know I’ve been more then a little trying since I got here.” Her smile got a little bigger. “But 0
But 0? But 0 what? Is that a mistake or some kind very suspenseful ending I don’t understand. Well anyway id also like to say I really like how you portrayed the scene in Tsunade office when Naruto confronts the ANBU, hehehe serves him right for talking about Naruto and Temari like that. Wow that was a long review for me, well im still a faithful reader and a great topper to the Canada day celebration and I cant wait for the next chapter please post it soon!

very good chapter i hope i new one comes out soon
its nice to read new stuff tho
anyways keep up the good work
btw this smut is very well written

Nice chapter, good interaction with characters, I enjoy the plot as well. 43 pages is amazing, and to tell the truth, it didn't even seem that long since I was so engrossed in the story ^^ keep up the good work, I could only hope that my story on FF will be as good!

the chapter is sooo good....
update soon!!