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that was awsome please update very very soon like imedeetly

Yeah now thats what I am talking about!!!!! Man that was a good chapter and I was so happy that it came out ^_^. Keep up the great work and update when you have time please.

I had the Phoenix Souls added to my name after I joined there writers guild :)

Wow. That was a GREAT chapter. VERY long too. I woke up a couple of hours ago and immediately started reading it. I can’t believe that ANBU asshole. What a damn jerk. He deserved what was coming. He should be kicked off Anbu for purposely falsifying a report. I hope Naruto really does tell the Kazekage about what happened. That ass deserves some permanent damage to be marred into thick skull. I hope he doesn’t try to get Naruto back or anything. Not that he can. Unless you have something up your sleeves?

I loved that scene with Tsunade and Kakashi. So cute. And their internal monologues made it more humorous. Are you thinking about making them into a couple, perhaps? If so, then it’ll be my first to actually read such a pairing. But of course with YOUR writing style it would be easily pulled off. The little peck on the cheek was really cute. Made me burst in giggles.

Hinata is so awesome. I just love that girl. The way you portrayed her and everything. Finally someone was able to get through our Sand kunoichi. I can’t begin to fathom how emotional the topic was for her was. She has her own kids, after all. But I could clearly understand about not wanting to be the one to perform the abortion. That’s something that’s always been a sensitive topic in itself for me.

I don’t know whether it’s a good thing or not, but I’m liking the fact that Kyuubi can still do something for Naruto. Like healing him. I was laughing when he did back flips at the news that Temari would be keeping her baby. I did not expect her, however, to ask Naruto if he wanted to be the Godfather. Obviously, there were a lot of things that were not expected from this chapter, but that one really surprised me. I wonder what his answer will be. He still seems a bit distraught with all the things that have happened, and I could only hope that he doesn’t turn down the request. It’s not that I think that you’ll do that, it’s just that I can’t predict my sweet blonde’s actions at the moment. And is it just me, or does he still seem angry? I hope not. God I really hope not.

You are incredible. Thank you so much for providing such a long and healthy chapter. And enjoy your summer as your write. I definitely do NOT expect for you to have another long chapter like that, and that would obviously be okay. Otherwise, you’d be losing your sanity over my long reviews. *winces* wow, I really have to shut up now. Take care


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Ria ^.~

you leave a cliffhanger like that and then say you don't know when you are going to be updating!!!!!!!!!!!!! please more soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! your ever loyal and devoted fan!!!!!!! PLEASE i beg of you! Update!!!!!!

hmm....i think i may have a feeling where this is going....this chapter didn't really advance the story line to much besides the fact on what shes gonna do with the baby and the kyuubi thing....but it was a long chapter and a good read. i enjoyed it very much keep up the good work :-

i liked this....very long compared to the other chapters awesome job! keep it up

and another wonderful addition!!!! yay! love this story nice job on this chapter so happy shes keeping it!!

this chapter was nice!! update soon plz!

awww shes gonna keep the baby! gaara's gonna kill everything.....whats happening with him btw?? lol update please.!

OMG this is good.

I got sucked into reading it about 5 hours ago and just got to the end of whats written.

I wish there was some alert featire on aff to know when a new chapter is, but this is good enough it will just have to get added as a favorites bookmark so I can keep watch for the next chapter,,,

The characterization is amazing. Its like not a ginle character is weak in how they are presented, they are just *boom* themselves, even if just for a cameo.

Wow

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