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AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! It's out it's out it's out it's out it's out - the new chapter is out!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!! *happy dance around the room* Finally Naruto starts to get a clue and open up to Temari about his problems *more happy dance*. Of course knowing my luck with not being able to predict your story, right about when things start gong well Gaara will show up and complicate it more. The whole Kakashi and Tsunade flirting/turn-on thing caught me so completely by surprise I had to stop reading and call my friend who has been following this story too! (BTW, any chance of you updating Return to Sound soon?) As always, I LOVED it! Keep up the good work!! (And update soon please?)

Holy shit! Bombshell time, perfect chapter to one of my favorite stories of all time. From the first chapter this story has had me hooked and i'm glad to see it hasn't been put on hiatus for too long, please do continue it . Though i'm busy trying to figure out how it will end it is obvious there are still a few surprises left in store, looking forward to it!

Hey, I am one of your FF readers and I accidentially stumbled across this version. You've been holding out on me, damn you! Honestly you have me looking in my mail box every day for an alert that the next chapter is up. And now I find three whole new chapters. Well the wait was worth it and even would have been if I had to wait longer. And as far as all time most messed up places to end a chapter ... I officially nominate chapter 15 for the win. Damn, I have said it before and I will say it again hell of a story.

ps Thankyou for giving my man Rock Lee Sakura. It warms my heart to see the man getting some.

WHAT 0_o
well good job i still love your story thanks again for getting that out of Tem and there was no 1 better to tell it to than Hinata.


p.S. im not an aothor yet but I have some storys i want to write in the next month or so i would love it if u would review them.

OMFG HE HAD A KID OH SHIIIIITTTT OHHHHHH SHHHHHHHHHIIIIIIIIIIIITTTTTTTTT!!!!! DAMN!!! im gettn hella goosbumps from that man whoooo its a very good high i actually yelled out loud and shit cuz of dat man i got in trouble but it was worth it reading you stories and stuff man its jsut awesome and KYUUBI!!!! his awesomeness must return he i s a playa ho ho ho!!! damn shes keepn the baby well its wrong to kill it but its also kinda odd to keep it considering it was from a rape and oh forget it too mjuch controversy on dat man gives ye a headache but a she gets a kid! but i wonder the one who impregnated her is of someone illustrious or well known or somethng...hmmm well ya cna have a kid that doesnt have your blood but he still can be a son to ye and Temaris rape may have been planned?!?!?! a conspiracy!!! to start a war or something to to get rid of Naruto and stuff maybe? godamn so many possiblilities and thinking i am fuckn confused but ey its a good feeling and i cant wait for the next chappy its liek a drug i need more and more and more *hands many milliolns of dollas* i need more thn a nickelbag chapter of this story man its awesome WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!11111111111 lol

Thanks for this quite good creative work. I particularly like how you maintain the panicked feelings Temari has. It seems to flow well. I'm waiting for when the deamon fox will get his chance to call naruto an idiot. thanks again

ok, now that i'm calm and done reading...

i'm real big on hating rapists.

rasing the child of someone who raped you could be on eof the circles of hell as far as im concerned.

just threw me for a loop, sorry about the shouting.

you're a good writer i think, i like the story, aside from her not terminating the pregnancy as soon as hinata said the word.


anyways, keep updating ^.^

i'm glad to see this survive the changes this site has undergone, its definelty one of the more interesting stories unde rthe naruto fandom here. Your character portrayals have been fantastic as well as how strongly the mood of the story is felt.

YAY! I caught up. It took me all night to read. I gonna go sleep now.

you know I never really payed attention to some of the real deep facts but now I do and Naruto can get any girl Kakashi says eh? godamn lucky son of a gun!!! Man Kyuubis cool hes just trying to help him out with Temari and stuff......and getting laid all the more i mean come on what dude wouldnt YEAH!!! I didnt know that most of the village liked him now I thought they still hated him inyour story meh well i re read everythn so yeah and that ANBU bastard is a asshole I say HANG HIM!!! HE MUST DIEY!!! ok later dude!