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for After the pain

by Legilmyth

person sailor mercury
schedule May 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay another good chapter! keep it up :-)
person Slade
schedule May 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow..and i thought it couldn't get any better nice job
person sonic sonar
schedule May 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i don't know...i read it...i just can't get in to it..don't know why.....oh wellguess different people like different things ...its written well though nice detail
person addiautti
schedule May 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOOOOOOO CHAPTER 13 AFTER AN EXCRUCIATING WAIT!! NARUTO AIN'T THE ONLY ! HAVIN WITHDRAWL SYMPTOMS! review fast i need me fix!! 0_x
person anti up bitch
schedule May 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice story
person atfalu
schedule May 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well..a long wait but the new chapter was well worth it...i suppose it will be longer and longer due to summer..oh well keep up the good work
person shadowfox49201
schedule May 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More i need more. update soon.
person FireKitty
schedule May 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH MY F**KIN GOD This cant be happening. I am very mad and sad i want to kill the people who violated Tem. and there is no telling what will happen when Gaara finds out will he attack naruto because he thinks he did it i cant wait to find out.
Still great story continue please this is still the best story ive read i really want to se the people who violated Tem SUFFER BADLY
person Reemu-Chan (not signed in)
schedule May 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I feel so awful. I should have reviewed this chapter forever ago, but I was too caught up with work. I really wanted to leave a nice review, but I found myself postponing and postponing till. . . whatta'ya know, it's been over a week. *sighs* I'm sorry. T^T I feel awful. On with the story. I freaked when Hinata gave Temari the news that she was indeed pregnant. Poor girl. I mean, I don't believe in abortion. Babies are innocent. It's not like they planned to just show up. And as a human being. . . . well, you know, I believed you should bear the responsibility. You’re still the parent, afterall. I often questioned myself, b/c I'm a virgin, what would I do if I was raped and ended up getting pregnant. I can't even fathom what I'd put myself through. I told my friend that I would put up a helluva fight and they'd seriously end up raping a dead body, b/c I am strong. And you don't have to be physically strong to be strong. I have a strong will. Does that make sense? I believe that rapists should be executed, hung, burned alive, I don't care. Anyone would prolly do. Especially if it's done to a child. No one should be forced into that kind of mess.
oh look at me, I'm going off topic. Gomen. I'm just a bit twisted in my own story and have a lot on my mind. Anyways, I have to be a bit quick b/c I'm leaving somewhere soon. I'm starting to believe that Gaara accidentally killed the messenger that was sent to Suna. Am I right? ^^ I like to guess. When Naruto came home and discovered that Temari was pregnant, I really began to think that you had made Temari go mental. She was becoming very unstable and when Naruto finally took control .. . Wow. I applaud. He took the situation very well, and it sounds as if he’d help her raise her kid. ^-^ ßThat makes me very happy. But still, I really REALLY can’t wait till Gaara and Kankurou find out. It’ll be interesting. Is Temari getting all tough again? Dude, she sounded like she was going to hunt those men on the spot and skin them alive. The images going through my head. . . . lol. . . . .they were priceless. Okay, no need in annoying you half to death. I hope you update soon. I’m very curious about what’s next to follow.

Have a Nice Day, and keep up the Great work! ^-^



Ria ^.~
person blutark
schedule May 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
will gaara kill the baby?